Patreon and Riwas Reads updates 4 (1)

Riwas Reads is back up and running. Here are the uploads for January

Doing the MILF part 4 (plus bonus) (1-5-18)

10435 words – $5.00

From the keyboard of Richard “Riwa” Shepard comes another addition to the MILF story with some new JustPaul illustrations. Included is an older story recently edited and also including his picture illustrations. My thanks for his great renders.

Doing the MILF 4 – Shaun and Stella have a meal where he discusses his last encounter with Janice. On Saturday he and Janice make a delivery to a place where she is housesitting. But when they catch a young woman using the pool, Janice makes her hold her breath before using a strap-on on her… and then invites Shaun to join in. (7 renders; 17 pages)
Trio in the Jacuzzi – Two girls decide to teach an arrogant male a lesson while all three of them share a Jacuzzi at a resort. (9 renders; 11 pages)

Scuba Combo VI (1-5-18)

9077 words – $5.00

From the keyboard of Richard “Riwa” Shepard comes a trio of scuba related stories.

Gold Fever – Two ladies tussle on the ocean floor over a bar of gold. (15 pages plus vidcaps for illustrations)
Never dive alone – A chance encounter with a fishing ends badly. (12 pages plus vidcaps for illustrations)
Bonus story involving scuba

Kane’s Vendetta 10 – Their missing friend might be on an island. The safest approach appears to be through a tunnel, requiring the use of scuba gear. (11 pages)

A dive pool bet (plus bonus) (1-15-18)

14226 words – $6.00

From the keyboard of Richard “Riwa” Shepard comes a brand new story illustrated by JustPaul with a bonus story included.

A dive pool bet – Stacy makes a bet with her friend that she can hold her breath long enough to swim to the bottom of the dive pool, swipe Chuck’s swim trunks while he is busy stroking his meat, and then return to the surface before getting caught. (23 pages; 13 JustPaul illustrations)
A houseboat in Lake Havasu – Stacy and Robin discover a submerged houseboat during a party with friends on Lake Havasu. Stacy gets snagged by some fishing line while taking underwater pictures for her Facebook page. (10 pages)

Breathholding in the Pool (plus bonus) (1-15-18)

27707 words – $6.00

From the keyboard of Richard “Riwa” Shepard comes a pair of older, recently edited stories.

Breathholding in the Pool – I meet a woman at the pool where we engage in some breath-holding games together. But as we both become more competitive, things start to take an erotic turn. (5 chapters; 36 pages)
Flowing in peace – While doing a music video in a tank of water, Lindsay is trapped when an earthquake causes debris to block her exit. (20 pages)

Aztec Queen VI (plus bonus) (1-26-18)

20078 words – $6.00

From the keyboard of Richard “Riwa” Shepard comes a continuation of the Aztec Queen saga with JustPaul illustrations, with a bonus story included.

The Aztec Queen VI – The Queen attempts to mate with another warrior in the water, alas with unhappy results. Meanwhile Yaotl is introduced to Citlalli as Atl investigates the coup against her queen. But the Healer oversees all, and makes his plans. (25 pages; 16 JustPaul illustrations)

Boring Saturday Afternoon – Susan feels neglected. So she dresses up to tease her husband. But she is unaware he has already been planning on feeding his wicked aquaphile lusts by tormenting his wife in the pool. She is in for a long afternoon of being tied up and experiencing orgasms. (24 pages)

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Coming February Rewards

I think a month short of days should be long on rewards. So I want to see if I can add three stories to each level. Included will be the following…

The third chapter to the Jamie Club story (and maybe a fourth).

The third chapter to the Island story (and maybe a fourth).

Chapter eight of First-timer.

Chapter five of Water Babies.

3 shorts including 2 more from the A-Z consensual asphyxia/drowning series.

3 stories being prepared or re-edited for the library.

I hope your January is going well.

December stories/rewards will fall off at the end of January to make room for February rewards.

Thanks for being my patrons.

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Take My Wife & Fuck Her Underwater 4.5 (51)

Take My Wife & Fuck Her Underwater

By Hildy

© 2018

 

It can be intense watching another man fuck your wife underwater for the first time and for the first time force her to experience a breath-hold orgasm.

It can be intense, disturbing — and yes, thrilling — watching the woman you love so much being fucked so deeply — so wantonly — and in such a kinky, dangerous manner by some alpha male — and then doing absolutely nothing while she thrashes and jerks out the last of her air while screaming and climaxing beneath the surface.

But it can be even more intense — more unnerving — when she is pulled to the surface, red-faced and gasping and choking and demanding the other man fuck her again the same way.

Is this the woman I have been married to for 27 years — the mother of my three children — the woman I thought I understood and knew like the back of my hand?

Let me explain.

After 27 years of marriage the pets were dead, the kids had left the nest and my wife — Joyce — was still hot looking to turn the heads of men half her age.

We still deeply loved each other, but our marriage bed was as unused and stale as week-old bread.

Career pressures and the recent deaths of our own parents was taking a toll. Our fuck-fests which use to last for hours had become a routine of less than an hour and perhaps once a month.

Pretty sad.

We decided to fight the boredom and on a whim we elected to attend a local “lifestyle” event being held at a suburban residence.

Joyce was nervous and so was I.

We can honestly say neither one of us had sex with someone else since we married.

Yes, we flirted, did some holiday party kissing, but that was it. We were as devoted as any couple can ever be — but wished for some excitement.

As they say — be careful what you wish for.

As typical Type A people we first devoured some books on the lifestyle subject and thought we had prepared ourselves for what to expect.

That turned out to be true and not so true.

At the event all the other couples were nice — some were sexually attractive and some were not. We had a great time dancing, drinking and watching other couples fuck their hearts out.

Of course that revved up our desires. It’s amazing what watching others fuck can do to your own sleeping libido.

Since it was our first time we decided to go slow and just have sex just with each other.

How naive can can you get?

After opening the bedroom door and thereby inviting others to watch we soon had a large audience. We went at it like sex-starved rabbits.

I was proud I lasted as long as I did.

After Joyce climaxed two or three times and I had unloaded a full blast we paused for a drink. My bride was smiling and glowing — still naked and splayed out on the bed with my cum glistening and oozing out of her shaved cunt onto a towel.

She was almost showing off how fuckable she was.

That’s when another man I only had been introduced to earlier as Raymond bent down — without asking — and began lapping my wife’s cunt — eagerly slurping up my seed.

He was younger than me, good looking, solidly built and naked.

I waited for Joyce to push him away, but to my utter shock she instantly pulled Raymond’s head tighter against her needy cunt, locked her feet — still wearing her spike heels — around his back and screamed out she was going to cum again.

So much for our earlier agreement not to have sex with anyone else.

Joyce reached for his fat, hard cock, but he politely pushed her hand away. “This is only for you,” I heard him say.

At this point I should have stepped in and stopped it. I did not.

I watched Raymond tongue-fuck my wife into multiple orgasms. She went wild — each time arching her back, driving her cunt harder against his face, wailing her full-body climaxes.

I watched my wife eagerly being pleasured by another man.

I did not know it at the time, but this was just the start of my Joyce enjoying the pleasures provided by this handsome hunk.

Joyce was inadvertently and eagerly joining a rather large club of women who thought Raymond was the greatest fuck-master of all time.

Raymond’s wife was not to be seen and according to what Joyce and I had agreed to we would do nothing unless we both participated.

Did I stop Raymond this first time? Of course not. I watched.

After giving my wife such pleasure Raymond kissed Joyce, offered his hand to me saying “your wife is so beautiful and sweet.”

He handed me a business card with a photo of him and his attractive wife along with an address. He said we were invited to his party the following week. He told us we could enjoy the pleasures of his food, his liquor, swimming in his indoor pool and fucking his wife. HIs address was on the card.

We still did not know his last name. But Joyce was nodding her head “yes.”

In just seven days from that moment my beloved Joyce would be nearly drowned-fucked more than once by another man, but I had no clue that was going to happen.

To be continued…..

((Here are two photos of Joyce and Raymond taken by someone shortly after arriving at his house for the lifestyle party)

The night of the party Joyce wore a simple sun dress — the kind that instantly falls to the ground when untied from the back. She was braless with micro crotchless see-through black panties and fuck-me high heels.

Her nipples already were as hard and pointed as if she had brushed them with ice cubes.

She looked like a high class whore and I loved it. I got as hard as rebar just watching her walk to the car.

I was also conflicted because I knew in a few minutes she would be fucking another man who I barely knew, but who had obviously captured my wife’s desire and her heart.

“You know Raymond’s wife looks pretty cute in that photo,” Joyce said to me, trying to soften any feeling of jealousy that she knew I was harboring.

If the photo was accurate Raymond’s wife — Trudy — was attractive. But that meant nothing if she was not interested in me. Neither of us had met Trudy and so I kept my expectation low.

Raymond and Trudy greeted us at the door. Both were wearing elegant robes — both robes were untied — both husband and wife were naked.

I know it sounds Gay, but I couldn’t help glance at Raymond’s package — damn if he wasn’t already aroused with his tanned fuck stick looking like some damn telephone pole.

My wife didn’t waste any time. She grasped Raymond by his cock and pulled him close for a soul kiss. My wife was so turned on she was probably dripping.

I looked at Raymond’s wife — fuck me, she was as sexy as hell with long hair, a perfect figure and a smile that promised many things. My own arousal soared.

Raymond broke the kiss and said to my wife: “I’m so glad you could come. All week long I’ve been wanting to make love to you.” Joyce moaned softly and kissed him again, with even more passion..

Trudy turned my head so she could kiss me. “No need to worry about Raymond. He’ll give Joyce tremendous pleasure. He will fuck your wife and she’ll love it.

“Now, kiss me and then suck my nipples.”

She opened her robe wider, inviting me to do so.

At this point we were still standing in the open door way where anyone passing by on the street could see us.

I took Trudy’s statement as a challenge and test. Was I aggressive enough to satisfy Raymond’s wife?

I hesitated a split second.

What would my wife think about me fucking another woman. Was my wife going to be jealous? What would neighbors say if they drove by and saw us like this? How could I permit another guy — some rich, confident, bastard to make my wife his fuck slave?

“Shut the fuck up,” I told myself and stop over thinking this.

It helped that Trudy was tongue-kissing me fiercely. I responded by crushing her body next to mine.

Then I bent down and began worshipping her enormous nipples — first one then the other. I pulled her perfect breast against my face and tightened one hand against her smooth, firm ass. Trudy thrust forward, pushing her nipple deeper into my mouth.

“Oh yeah baby suck it deep in your mouth,” she whispered. “Suck it hard — that’s how I like it.”

I did as Ms. Trudy commanded.

After a few moment os this public foreplay the four of us walked inside a magnificent house and toward the biggest indoor pool I could ever imagine.

Perhaps a dozen couples were lounging around, drinking and talking. My eyes went to three couples in the pool who were fucking like banshees. One of the men suddenly thrust his female partner backward and beneath the surface.

This was my introduction to underwater fucking. I kept watching, waiting for her to surface — but she did not. All I could see were her feet above the surface and his arms extended straight down preventing her from rising.

What the hell kind of party was this?

By this time Raymond had led my wife toward the pool steps as if she was some sort of sacrifice. He stepped behind her and in a flash her dress was untied. His thumbs yanked the crotchless panties right off.

My shy wife stood naked in front of 25 or 30 people. She was in effect saying “watch me get fucked everyone by this magnificent Raymond while my whim, submissive husband watches and does nothing.”

Raymond walked down the pool steps with my wife eagerly following. She was naked except for a small weight belt.

Trudy handed me a dive mask. “Here, use this to watch my husband drown-fuck your wife.”

What the hell did she just say? Was Raymond some freak killer? Was my trusting wife in danger? What the hell was a drown-fuck?

I felt like I was in some sort of horror movie with a bunch of killers.

Did I scream for Joyce to stop? Did I jump in and yank her out of Raymond’s grasp? Did I try to punch Raymond’s lights out?

To my shame I did nothing like that.

With shaking hands I put on the dive mask and saw my wife — for the first time ever — worshipping another man’s cock –

My wife is just an average swimmer and she can’t stay under long. That’s what I thought.

I stuck my head up to get a breath, but Joyce did not rise. Instead she stayed under while Raymond started attacking her clit with what my wife already knew was his super talented tongue.

Raymond was deep fucking my wife while both of them were underwater. I was on my knees on the pool bottom just a few feet away wearing a dive mask — watching this obviously dangerous fuck that could threaten my wife’ life and doing nothing to stop it.

I felt shame that my wife was enjoying herself so much — enjoying another man bringing her to orgasm in such a kinky way — and that it wasn’t me.

Of course I was jealous, but I couldn’t make myself intervene and stop it.

I kept watching. Twice I had to rise for air. I couldn’t believe how long Joyce was staying under.

They rose — now my wife was gasping for air. Raymond ignored me and said to her: “Should I stop, do you want to go back to that weak husband of yours?”

Joyce didn’t look at me. I saw incredible lust in her eyes. “Keep fucking me, fuck me as hard as you can. It’s so wonderful.”

Raymond replied: “I know your close to cumming so take a deep breath because I may not let you up until I feel your cunt spasming around my cock.”

Joyce had barely taken a huge breath when he plunged them back under.

My wife was twisting and jerking as Raymond pounded into her hot, wet cunt. She was enjoying being controlled like
some rag doll. Her eyes were closed to better experience the pleasure.

How long was he keeping my wife under? I didn’t know until I rose for a breath for a second time. Raymond’s wife — Trudy — had joined me in the pool. I barely noticed she was naked.

“I’ve been timing your wife,” she said to me. “She’s doing better than most of the other wives here. Joyce has been lasting a full minute and a half.”

Trudy stood behind — her luscious tits smashed against my back. She reached around and started stroking my cock. It felt incredible, but I was so tense from watching my wife that I couldn’t fully enjoy the feeling.

“You mean Raymond has fucked all these other wives like he’s doing to Joyce now?” I asked her.

“Oh yeah — most several times. Their husbands are like you — they watch, but do nothing while my husband drown-fucks them.”

There was that horrible term again.

“What the fuck does that mean? What is your freak husband going to do to my wife,” I demanded to know.

“Nothing that they don’t want,” she replied. Trudy looked at her watch — “look your wife has been down just about two full minutes. Raymond may give her one more breath before he takes her under and gets her off while she starts to drown.”

At that instant Raymond and Joyce erupted above the surface. He wasn’t even breathing heavily while my bride was beet red with her chest heaving. Her breasts were swaying with each gasping intake.

“Last time — take a big breath just one more time,” Raymond ordered her. Joyce just nodded and kept deep breathing.

Raymond turned to me. “Your wife is such a great fuck. She’s never experienced such pleasure. Be sure to watch because she wants my cock so much she’s willing to start to drown for it.”

His words made me feel like I was having a heart attack.

“Joyce, stop this, stop this now,” my pleading sounded so pathetic. She simply looked at her lover again and said “Go ahead do it — take me under and keep me there until I cum.”

Raymond smirked at me and thrust my wife down.

Trudy spoke in a detached — almost scientific manner. “Let’s see if she can last more than two minutes before she loses all her air and starts to cum. How much is she willing to risk to enjoy such a breath-hold fuck?”

I sank down and saw my wife — my wanton, slut of a wife — a wife I loved with all my heart — giving herself completely to another man and risking her life for the underwater pleasure he could give her.

She couldn’t last two minutes — no way. Joyce was twisting and thrusting her body — forcing Raymond’s cock as deep into her cunt as it could possibly go. She was yelling and losing air in torrents.

Her lungs couldn’t possibly have enough air to last until she climaxed. Each time Raymond thrust into her Joyce would moan, losing more air.

Trudy was underwater with me. She pointed to her watch and held up one finger. One minute had already passed.

My wife suddenly slowed her motions — she grimaced, twisting her face horribly — her body went

stiff and ridged as a piece of steel.

With a loud shriek she climaxed — bending almost upside down in sheer mind-numbing pleasure.

One huge bubble of air burst from her lips — then one more — then nothing.

She was starting to drown and I kept watching….

I wish I could say this is the end of this wretched story.

I wish I could say that was the end of my humiliation.

I wish I could say I took my wife back and we left Raymond and his sadist drown-fuck desires never to see him again.

But I can’t.

Raymond lifted my wife to the surface — she was gasping and choking, but still managing to shower him with kisses. Each kiss made me feel like I was being shot.

Another guy walked into the pool and stood near Raymond who was cuddling my wife — kissing her gently and stroking her breasts. Joyce’s nipples were extended — begging to be sucked.

She pulled one of Raymond’s hands over one nipple. “Pull it harder, pinch it. I like the pain.”

Joyce had never said that to me.

Who was this woman I had been married to for 27 years? Who was this women that had willingly risked her life for some underwater thrill drown-fuck by a strange man?

I was clueless.

The second man bent toward Joyce and began suckling on her nipples. “Are you ready for Round Two?” he asked her.

My wife never looked to me for permission. She was still so lust-filled and cock-hungry she didn’t know I was there.

She spoke to both Raymond and the second guy. “The risk — the rush while being fucked underwater is so powerful. I want to experience it again. Do it again — just as hard and just as long.”

Raymond easily shifted Joyce around — holding her in front. Shamelessly she eagerly opened her legs. This wife-stealing bastard didn’t wait a second before thrusting fully into my wife’s cunt.

“Oh my God — it feels so fucking hard and good,” my wife wailed.

“I’m taking you under now. Bend backward and swallow my friend all the way down your throat,” he told my wife.

I don’t remember the last time Joyce had gone down on me. She had already give an underwater blow job to Raymond — now she was going to do the same to a second man whom she had never met.

She was a slut and I couldn’t help but worship and love her.

Both men stood with their heads above the surface. Only Joyce would be under.

Raymond’s wife, Trudy, whispered to me. “I know you want to watch your wife pleasuring another man. I know you want to watch your wife getting fuck by my husband and a second guy fucking her mouth.”

Trudy was a bitch — she read me like some first-grade comic book. She pushed my shoulders down and like a good submissive I went to the pool bottom on my knees to watch my eager wife being plundered by two hunks.

My wife arched her back like some circus contortionist and while upside down swallowed the second man’s cock to the root.

Both men started thrusting — pulling and jerking her back and forth. The second mad’s cock was as big as Raymonds — both impossibly big.

Yet my demure wife — well, no longer so demure — was taking both cocks into her body and fucking loving it.

I had to rise for air, but Joyce was relentlessly being held under.

“I bet she goes more than two minutes this time before cumming again,” Trudy spoke to me as I had risen to get some air.

I was more fearful than ever for my wife’s safety.

“This is going too far,” I said. “Joyce was lucky she didn’t drown last time. Your bastard husband is going to drown my wife for his own pleasure. Fucking stop this.”

Trudy looked at me like I was going insane. I knew I looked desperate.

“Go ahead, step in and stop it,” she said.

At that moment I heard an underwater scream — but it was a scream of pure pleasure.

“I bet your wife just had another cum,” Trudy said.

My wife shot to the surface — frothy white slimy cum was pouring from her mouth.

“Oh my God that was so much cum,” she spoke to me for the first time. “I love getting fucked by two men. What have I been missing.”

Raymond assured her. “We’re just getting started babe.”

The second man — I still had no idea who the fuck her was — stood behind my wife and started easing his cock into her. He was going to do her doggie-style.

I was shocked to hear my wife say — “My husband never took me in the ass, so go slow.”

Now I knew I was having a heart attack.

My wife had never indicated she wanted anal sex. I never ever dared to suggest it. Now she was giving permission to some unknown stranger to ass-fuck her.

My wife looked directly at me. “Honey he’s, he’s…” — she paused as a look of pain crossed her face. “Oh Jesus that feels so deep — and so good. He’s so deep in my ass.”

Raymond spoke. “Take another breath Joyce because while you’re getting ass fucked underwater I want you to eat me.”

Joyce just nodded. She inhaled again — a huge, huge breath — and all three submerged.

Trudy didn’t have to push me under to watch. In my total shame I would watch two men fuck my wife again — including for the first time anally.

By now my wife was getting used to holding her breath for as long as two minutes. I was mesmerized as my wife serviced two men — giving pleasure and receiving pleasure.

Two or three times they all rose for air, but quickly submerged again.

All the while they were under my wife was moaning and thrusting back to bury the man’s thick cock into her ass. Each time my wife did so she swallowed Raymond’s stalk all the way down.

I could see Joyce’s throat bulging outward each time she swallowed him. It was wonderfully obscene.

Several times she started to choke — I could hear her gagging — but each time she thrust her head downward harder burying his cock down her throat.

It was agony — it was intense pleasure — watching my wife getting fucked like this.

I don’t know how long it lasted — but it seemed like forever.

Then both men yelled. Both were cumming in my wife — one man’s seed was jetting into her ass and the other’s semen was jetting down her throat.

After a long, long moment Joyce pulled free and shot to the surface. There was a look of triumph on her face — as if she was in some contest to be the world’s greatest slut. More cum was dripping from her lips.

For the first time since we entered this cursed house my wife came to me. She kissed me and I tasted Raymond’s cum.

“Things have changed,” she said to me.

I nodded yes like some dumb fuck. Things would never be the same.

 

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(AF’s) The Grim Reaper 3.6 (5)

Oh hello there. You caught me in the middle of someone. What…? I look like who? …the Grim Reaper? What was it that gave it away? Was it my robe and scythe? Yeah, I guess those are kinda noticeable. …what? …yes I am drowning someone right now. But I’ve got a few minutes if you want an interview. Don’t worry about her down there. She’ll keep… or drown in this instance.

The blonde hair peeking out of the robe fool you for a second there? You want an explanation? Certainly; I’ll be happy to explain.

You see, I’m a playboy centerfold. …well, I was one until that jealous bitch drowned me. Yeah, I said “drowned me”. We were at the playboy mansion swimming naked in that grotto when she made her move… caught me by surprise, the fucking bitch! She pushed me down and held me under, watching me the whole time to make sure I was gone. Then she claimed it must have been an accident… I got drunk or got lazy or some shit like that. And she got away with it too… well, she thought she did.

I got her back though once I got the gig. It was sort of on a trail basis, you see. I kept my eye on her until she went for a naked swim in her pool. Then I turned the surface of the water into glass. You should have seen the look on her face when she couldn’t reach the air she needed. She couldn’t understand what had happened. It made no sense the way she couldn’t get up for air.

I stayed out of sight until right before her lungs gave out. Then I made sure she saw who it was who’d arranged her painful drowning. She was horrified of course. But she beat on the glass, begging me to let her out. I just shook my head.. “No way, you fucking bitch! Now you can experience what I experienced back in that grotto.”

That was my first death… well, my first drowning death. And let me tell you: It was such an incredible turn-on. I watched as her cheeks bulged, her eyes bugging out of her sockets. Then air burst out of her mouth as her lungs heaved. That’s when she started her show. Those boobs bounced deliciously as she sucked water. She convulsed so painfully that it was incredible to watch. And those drowning bubbles… the way she coughed up her air? It was so fucking sexy that it’s kind of hard to explain really. It’s just super hot!

Her lungs and stomach flooded before she sank to the bottom. My glassy surface was no longer needed so I removed it. She lay on the bottom hitching and jerking as a couple stray bubbles slipped out of her mouth. Now she knew how I felt when I had drowned.

Sexy bubbles… yeah, that’s what I said… just like the bitch I’m drowning right now. She’s trying to hold her breath, but she keeps losing little bursts of air. It’s such a turn-on if you ask me, knowing the air she’s releasing will be the last air she ever tastes.

Well, when the higher-ups saw what I did with drowning that first sexy bitch, they gave it to me on a full-time basis. And I took to it like a fish to water, if you’ll pardon the pun. Now I really love the water. It’s the best place of all for taking souls – nice, clean and painful! The one I’ve got down there on the end of my scythe is certainly finding that out right now, don’t you think? All those bubbles really turn me on!

My next kill was kind of interesting as I still had to prove myself. So I got a little creative. I found this Mistress who loved abusing the maids who worked for her. So I bided my time and waited. Sure enough, one of the maids pissed her off, earning herself a special dunking.

That Mistress tied her to a chair and then put her into their little private pool. She was just going to engage in a little discipline, you know? But I sort of stepped in and helped things out a little. You see I don’t always manifest myself. And when I do it’s not always in the apparition you see before you right now. Sometimes I simply slip into the body of the potential killer. Then together we get the job done.

She and I dunked the shit out of that sexy bitch tied to the chair. Then I convinced her a drowning was the best way for re-establishing discipline. So I helped her hold the chair down until those sexy bubbles started coming up. Oh, she hitched and convulsed in that chair until her lungs flooded. And she stared upward in shock. It was such a fucking turn-on like you wouldn’t belive. Oh, the Mistress hadn’t planned on going quite that far. But I helped convince her it really was the best option.

The one I have in the pool right now? Oh, she’s trying to hold her breath. You can see she’s releasing bubbles to ease the strain in her lungs, hoping I’ll let her back up soon. She has no idea how hopeless her situation is. After all, I really want to watch her drown.

It’s really easy to find someone who wants to commit murder these days. Anger, jealousy, revenge; the motivations are endless. You’d be surprised how busy they’re keeping me. But I don’t mind. For instance, I ran into a divorce case where she was going to take him for all he was worth. So he took her for all she was worth out in their backyard pool. Hell, I didn’t have to do much of anything on that one. The way he held her down and those drowning bubbles came up? What a fucking rush. I think even he got off on it!

Why am I drowning this one? Oh, no reason really. I caught her looking so fucking sexy in her underwear that I couldn’t resist. And I knew right away she was going to make a great bubbler. It’s kind of amazing how I have a knack for knowing these things. See how she screams and loses more of her precious air? The part where they get close to panicking really fills me with great excitement and anticipation.

You remember how I told you jealousy is a strong motivator? Imagine my surprise when I was summoned to a pool party by this bride and her bridesmaids. It didn’t take much to turn them against her. And the pool was so handy. Well, down she went. And they stuck a foot in her chest to keep her down. I went down and watched the whole thing… the way she tried to hold her breath, her cheeks bulging as she struggled to be let back up. I could tell by the look on her face she was astonished they wanted to do this to her. But I’d seen it all before. And when she coughed up her air and started to drown, I went giddy with excitement.

When I decide to take a personal interest in these things I’ve found my sickle works great for this sort of thing. Wouldn’t you agree? After all she’s not going anywhere, not with her wrists tied to the end of my pole. All she can do now is hold her breath until that magic moment when her lungs give out. And the way she’s losing air makes me thing it won’t be much longer.

Once I inhabited the body of this diver so we could go after this skinny-dipper. We grabbed her and pulled her down to the depths and held on tight. She put up such a fight that it was a thrill to hold onto her.

Those drowning bubbles were so sexy. She gave us a really good show. Afterwards we examined her body. And we studied her face and her sexy drowning expression. I still remember that one with some fondness.

Like I said: I really love the bubbles. And hers are really sexy; don’t you think? Her lungs must be straining right now. She keeps releasing little bursts of air. Soon her lungs will be empty. That’s when she’ll have to inhale. That’s the best part.

There’s something about girls drowning girls that really holds a special place for me. Those are the drownings I love best. Maybe it’s because that’s the way I was drowned. So I love to give back that way as much as possible. Most of the time it doesn’t take much. And sometimes I inhabit the body of the one doing the drowning just so I can help out and experience it for real.

Take these two roommates. It was a fight over some boy. But I got to be there to witness the whole thing go down. I even inhabited the body of the one doing the drowning just to give her a little more urging… not that she needed much. Holding her roommate down and watching those bubbles come up was incredible! Hell, we ground our pussy against hers as we drowned her! What a fucking rush!

The agony displayed on their faces as they try to hold their breath is, shall we say… intoxicating? That’s one of the reasons why I love my job. The painful ways they drown makes it all the more enjoyable. Take this one I’m doing right now. You can see the agony in her expression as she tries to hold it just a few seconds longer.

This one keeps looking up to see who’s drowning her. She can’t believe it’s me. I must be some ghost or apparition to her. It’s ok, hun; really! It’s just little ol’ me up here, wanting to watch those painful spasms and those sexy bubbles. Go ahead and hold your breath a little bit longer if you must. I can wait. Unlike you, I have all the time in the world.

More bubbles; aren’t they wonderful?? Her lungs must be on fire by now. It shouldn’t be much longer. Gawd; I love my job!

And just look at those tits. Aren’t they sexy? You can see how hard her nipples are. That makes it so sexy knowing there’s a fearful arousal going through their bodies as they draw closer to drowning. Hell, I’ve had some of them orgasm while their lungs are flooding. Those have been fucking incredible!

Oh, this one’s a screamer. I really hit the jackpot with her. She’s in real agony now. A few more seconds and those lungs of hers are going to give out. Since you’re here, you can watch her with me. How does that sound? If you want, I can even walk you through her painful drowning.

And there she goes… off into those wonderfully painful convulsions as she coughs her breath away. This is the best part: when they spasm like that – coughing and convulsing? They look like they’re cumming so fucking hard. In fact I’ll bet this one is having a deliciously painful orgasm while she’s drowning.

It’s so sexy watching their bodies buck and jerk all caught up in the throes of drowning. It makes my job so much better watching them die painfully, their bodies convulsing like that. This one is a real winner. I knew I’d picked out a good one from the moment I saw her.

All through down there, hun? Have you finished drowning for me? Let me give my pole a little shake just to make sure. After all, one must be thorough about these things; am I right? Just have to make sure you’re finished and then I’ll be on my way.

How about it, hun? Are those lungs of yours properly flooded? My, but that’s a great death stare you’ve got. And you drowned so divinely. It was such a fucking thrill watching you bubble your life away.

Just look at her. Look at the expression on her face. You can tell how much it hurt. But that’s what made it so sexy; don’t you think? I see you got a little turned on watching me drown her as well. My scythe? Just watch. It just turned into the pool skimmer, so now it looks like the pool man did her in. Hell, he was probably upset she wouldn’t go out with him. These motivation things are so easy to set up.

Well, I must be off. It was actually enjoyable showing you my latest work. What; you’d like to see one more? Sure, I can do that. Grab onto my robe. I know it’s a cliché… just grab on, ok? I’ll take you to this next one. I can do that. Besides, I love an audience. I love it when others get to watch my work.

Ok, here we are. You see what they have going? It’s some sort of underwater bondage thing. She’s getting air through that hose and regulator. And she’s secured to that metal frame. This one is going to be so much fun… watching through the glass.

What am I going to do, you ask? Just imagine what’s going to happen when the air in that hose shuts off and they can’t get her up in time. That’s when all the fun will begin. Can you imagine how much she’s going to thrash around as she coughs up bubbles and drowns painfully? Now watch this…

© 2014; 2017 (written Jan 26 ’14; ed. Nov 26 ‘17 by riwa)

(Pictures are from Aqua Fantasies Random Acts and other sources are used for illustration purposes only.)

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Victor’s Guillotine 7 4.3 (12)

7

Renard didn’t seem to care what Prudence thought of his interrupting their session. The poor girl lying in the guillotine was almost in hysterics as he began to unstrap her from the bench. He gave the guy fucking her an angry look, causing the young man to pull out and look for his clothes.

The guy standing next to Prudence seemed jolted out of his shock. He helped Renard get the girl out of the straps. Then he started apologizing as she started gathering her clothes.

She was having none of it. “Tommy, you bastard! How could you let that bitch DO this to me?? And how could you let Wayne fuck me like that??”

“Vicki, you said you were ok with it! Besides, I wasn’t sure I wanted to fuck you while you were, uh… lying there in that, uh…”

“Renard, why couldn’t you leave well enough alone?”

“What the hell were you thinking, Prudence? Were you so anxious to go for a ride that you deliberately set the timer to risk her losing her head?”

“She WANTED it!”

“I seriously doubt that, not the way she was freaking out like that.”

The poor girl sobbed despite trying to be hugged by Tommy. Now I was really confused. Tommy had been standing next to Prudence, and I thought he was… Then it occurred to me.

Had Prudence set the whole thing up? Was the other guy named Wayne really her boyfriend? Had she talked him into fucking that poor girl just to get her head lopped off so she could go for a ride without violating her parent’s rules?

“If you were that anxious to ride it, Prudence, why didn’t you just climb on and take it for a spin? You like the risk anyway, right? Someday you’re probably going to lose your head despite your parent’s wishes.”

“You’re not my mom and dad, Renard!” That’s when he angrily grabbed her arm as I helped gather up that other girl’s clothes so she could get dressed.

“Maybe I should lock you into the guillotine at 1:50 and make you ride it all the way to the end, Prudence. That way you would lose your head for sure and save us all a lot of trouble.”

“You wouldn’t dare!”

“You want to help me strap her in?” he asked Wayne with an ominous look. “What; did she promise you the sensation of a clenching pussy at the moment of beheading? I’m sure we could arrange that for you if you’d like.”

“Renard, you can’t do that to me!”

“Why not, Prudence? You were going to do that to your friend here.”

“She’s NOT my friend!” the trembling woman spat out as she finished getting dressed.

“C’mon, Wayne. Let’s strap Prudence down. I’ll set the machine so you’re guaranteed to feel what it’s like to fuck a woman who’s just been beheaded.”

“Renard, don’t you dare!”

“Why not, Prudence? It’s what you want; right?”

“I just like the risk is all!”

“I think you want to go all the way. Don’t you think so too, Wayne? Don’t you think we should strap her down and make her ride the guillotine all the way?”

“Let go of me, you arsehole!”

Prudence jerked out of Renard’s grasp. She gave Wayne a dirty look as she rushed up the stairs. Wayne followed her up, and I assumed it was because they’d arrived together.

Tommy offered to take Vicki home. She was still sobbing quietly. They headed up the stairs a few moments later.

“Well, that was certainly interesting,” Renard observed when we were alone. “I think Victor should just dispense with his rule. I understand what he was thinking when he put it in place. But Prudence isn’t one for following the rules anyway.” He sighed as he shook his head.

“I’m sorry, Renard. Are you still carrying a torch for her?”

“I’d say the torch for her is just about out, Julie. That wasn’t a very nice thing for her to do to that girl, no matter how eager or turned on she was.”

We heard footsteps coming down the stairs. It made me wonder if Prudence was coming back down… or if her parents were coming down to give Renard a good talking to over some story she’d fed them to make him look bad. Instead I saw it was Jeff and his new girl Kimberly, followed by the Wylies and that new couple.

Jeff smiled as he asked, “What did you do to Prudence, Renard? She came upstairs spitting nails.”

“I told her she shouldn’t be risking other people’s lives just so she can ride the guillotine. Take a look at the timer. She had it at almost the one hour mark. The blade could have come down at any moment and cut that other girl’s head right off. The poor thing was in hysterics lying on the bench. Victor might have had another roaster for sure if we hadn’t come down when we did.”

Kimberly looked at the machine in awe. “So it really happened? Jeff, you were fucking Rita right here when the blade came down??”

“I sure was; right here.”

“Bloody hell!” She appeared to shiver now that she was seeing the machine that had taken her friend’s head.

“Damn, Ken! When you told us about it I thought you were putting us on!” That was the new redhead standing close to the Wylies.

Ken smiled at me as he motioned at the new couple. “Julie, I don’t think you’ve met our friends Clark and Bettie Farrish. They’re from up North and wanted to come down and see Victor’s guillotine for themselves.”

I smiled at them both as they offered me their hands to shake. But Kimberly was still looking at the guillotine with a sense of wonder. Was this the first time she’d seen it since she’d arrived with Jeff?

“So you really behead the ladies?” Clark asked as he examined the lethal machine.

Ken told him, “It’s not on purpose, Clark. The machine is randomly rigged on a timer. It starts at zero… or at least it’s SUPPOSED to start at zero.”

“I guess this was Prudence’ way of seeing if she could secretly arrange a beheading.”

Ken glanced at Renard over his comment before continuing his explanation to his friends. “Normally the timer gets set at zero and the ladies all go for a ride if they want. What makes it fun is the way they ride it naked as their boyfriend, husband or significant other fucks them. Just about everyone I’ve seen riding it ended up cumming pretty hard. I suppose it’s a combination of the threat of the hovering blade, riding it naked, and being fucked in front of a set of eager voyeurs.”

“You ride it naked?” Bettie asked Sybil in astonishment. “…right here in front of everybody??”

“That’s right. Even Julie over there has ridden it naked.”

I blushed as they all looked at me. I figured I should say something so I told them, “Well… I just sort of thought that was the rule down here. So I went with it.” Everyone laughed.

“I’m not sure I understand,” Kimberly remarked curiously. “The blade is supposed to come down… when?”

“It’s random,” Renard explained. “Normally we set the timer to zero and then start. Every time someone goes for a ride, the timer just keeps going from the last time it stopped. That means there’s a greater chance of the blade coming down for the next rider. The blade is set to drop randomly, so we never know when it’s going to fall.”

To illustrate, he walked over to the controls and pushed some buttons. The timer on the wall reset to 0:00:00. “We usually start right here and the ladies take turns riding. But we don’t normally reset the timer after a ride. It seems most of the women here like the risk of riding the guillotine after some time has elapsed, increasing the risk of the blade coming down.”

“Is that true?” Bettie asked Sybil in amazement.

“Absolutely. Not knowing if you’re going to lose your head adds to the experience. And the cums are really intense. Am I right, Julie?”

Naturally she was referring to my last ride, the scary one I’d taken last month just to stick it to Prudence. That one had been erotic as hell… and more than a little alarming. But the orgasm I’d experienced was unlike any I had previously enjoyed.

I laughed nervously. “Yeah, Sybil; it was pretty damned hot. But I’m not sure if I’m, uh… going to ride it again today.”

“Then why did you come back, honey? It can’t be due to our sparkling conversation, can it? Or did you come just to see if someone else might get beheaded… maybe our eager Dorothy perhaps?”

“Uh… maybe.”

Ken looked at his wife and smiled knowingly. “Honey, I’ll bet you five pounds she rides it before the day is over. Hell, I’ll bet you five pounds she rides it before we all go back upstairs. Right, Julie?”

I blushed as I lowered my head. “No bet,” Sybil told her husband with a laugh. “I can already see it in her eyes. If I were to take that bet, I might as well give you the money right now. She’s going to ride it again before the day is over. In fact…”

She paused for a moment, looking around at everyone in the room. Then she suggested, “Hey, Julie? How’d you like to demonstrate the guillotine for the Farrishes and for Kimberly over there… sort of break it in for them?”

I felt an erotic jolt as my breath caught in my throat. “Right now the machine’s set at zero, Julie,” Ken added. “You’re not afraid of taking a risk the blade might randomly fall this early, are you?”

“Is that possible?” Jeff’s new girl Kimberly asked. “I mean… is it possible the blade could fall real early?”

“It’s set on a random program,” Renard told her. “Theoretically it’s possible. You just never know.”

“Go for it, Julie!” Sybil gasped excitedly. “I want to watch Renard fuck you in the guillotine! I want to watch you cum!”

“Uh… I, uh… bloody hell!”

My heart started beating fast. I’d originally come back to Victor’s with the intention of not riding the bloody thing… or at least I’d tried to convince myself of that. Now I felt like I was being put on the spot… almost like a dare. And the thought of being fucked by Renard while riding it was tempting as hell!

Kimberly looked at me in alarm. “You’re not really going to, uh…” But Clark’s wife Bettie was looking at me as though she wanted to see me ride the bloody thing!

Ken didn’t help matters when he blurted out, “Go right ahead, Julie! You and Renard could probably use a good fuck right about now. We’re all friends and voyeurs down here. Besides, I think it would be great if we showed Kimberly and the Farrishes how the machine works, don’t you?”

“But isn’t it possible the blade could fall while she’s in it, Ken?”

“That’s right, Bettie… in which case, you’ll get to chew on some tasty ass Julie has there… or maybe it’ll be meat from her ribs or one of her limbs.”

“Go for it, Julie! Go for it!” Sybil was eager to see me naked on the guillotine.

I looked at Renard who just shrugged his shoulders. “I’ll fuck you if you’d like, Julie. Of course, if you want someone else to fuck you I’m sure one of the other guys here would be willing to lend a hand.”

“N-no, I’d rather it be you.”

“Then you’ll do it, Julie?”

“Damn you, Sybil!” She looked much too eager for my peace of mind

Everybody laughed as my heart leapt into my throat. I could tell I was getting wet as hell down below. That’s when I nervously grabbed a shoe and pulled it off my foot as I started to undress.

“I knew it!” Ken laughed. “You owe me five pounds, honey!”

“We never made the bet, remember?”

“That’s ok. You can ride it next. How does that sound? Julie can start the timer for us so you can have a go after she’s through. After all, we want to show our friends here what it’s like, right?”

“Damn, Ken! You’d like that, wouldn’t you!”

“Of course I would. Then maybe Kimberly might want to ride it next while Jeff is fucking her.”

“Ken??” Kimberly was aghast. But I thought I saw a flicker of something in her expression indicating she was actually giving it some thought.

I became the center of attention as I continued to strip. All eyes were on me as I removed every stitch of clothing I had on. I blushed as they all saw the moisture glistening in my crotch.

“Wait a minute! How do we know the machine’s in good working order?” Now Bettie was a little suspicious of it all.

I had just sat down on the bench when Renard walked over to the controls. He reset the timer to 1:50:00. Then he set it in motion. The timer started advancing… 1:50:01… 1:50:02… 1:50:03.

“What are you doing?” I asked Renard in a quiet voice.

“I’m just showing Bettie the machine is in good working order.”

“Is that really necessary?” I was already nervous to be going first.

“They want to see if the blade works, right? I might as well show them.”

I looked at the blade in growing alarm, suddenly second-guessing my decision to go first. What was I thinking?? I noticed everyone was watching as though waiting for something to happen.

We waited in silence for a few minutes. That’s when Bettie dubiously remarked, “You’ve got the blade locked in position, right? It’s probably not going to come do—“

It suddenly whooshed down at 1:53:47. Everybody jumped as it bottomed out with a loud thunk. That’s when Bettie blurted out, “HOLY SHIT!”

There was nervous laughter. Then Kimberly incredulously asked, “Damn, Julie! Are you really going to ride that bloody thing?”

Now I wasn’t so sure. I watched as Renard carefully got the blade back up into the air. He reset the timer to 0:00:00. Then he smiled at me.

“Still want to go for a ride, Julie? Or do you want to chicken out? I’m betting Sybil here is willing to ride it. Or should we go fetch Dorothy to come down to start the show.”

“No, I’ll go,” I said in a trembling voice. “Let’s get this over with.”

“I told you she was going to ride it before we went back upstairs, Sybil. You would have lost 5 pounds.”

“Oh shut up, darling.”

“Do you want to ride it next, love?”

“Hell yeah!” He just laughed at his wife’s eagerness.

I was trembling noticeably as Renard helped me lie down onto the cushioned bench on my stomach. He helped me slide forward until my head stuck through. That’s when he brought the lunette down onto my neck, giving me an erotic jolt. Seeing the wicker basket below waiting to catch my head didn’t reassure me in the slightest.

Sybil came around in front with her friend. “The first ride’s always the most exciting, Bettie. It lets us know if the blade’s going to come down right away or whether it’s going to let a bunch of us ladies take our chances.” Then she paused as she thoughtfully mused, “Julie, didn’t you start us off last time you were here?”

“Y-you can go first if you’d like, Sybil.” Now I was really having second thoughts.

“Oh no, honey. I wouldn’t want to deprive you of the pleasure of breaking it in for us. Besides, I never got to see Renard fuck you last time. This should be a real treat.” Then she leaned down and patted my head as she giggled, “Comfy yet?”

“N-not really.” She just chuckled at my discomfort.

About that time Jeff and Kimberly came around front as well. Renard warned, “I wouldn’t get too close to her head if I were you, love. If the blade falls, there’s going to be blood spatter.”

“Bloody hell, Julie! Are you really going to ride it?” Kimberly was astonished at my bravery… or was it my foolishness.

I flinched as Renard finished strapping me down. My legs hung off the end so that I was virtually kneeling, exposing my ass and my dripping twat to everybody. My face was red with embarrassment as I trembled like crazy, wanting to tell everyone I’d changed my mind yet unable to make my lips move.

“All ready?” Renard asked as he slapped my ass. I flinched from the smack as I looked up at the ladies looking down on me. I whimpered and moaned, my mind screaming at me to speak up and get the hell out of there before something lethal happened.

“She looks a little worried, Renard.”

“They all experience a certain trepidation once they get their heads locked in, Kimberly. I can’t blame them. After all, you just never know when the blade’s going to fall. My logic tells me it’s just not a good idea. But for some reason the ladies all seem to love it. Maybe it’s the orgasms.”

I finally found my voice. “Renard, I’m not really sure about this.” That’s when he came around to look at me.

“Ready for your ride, Julie?”

“I’m n-not sure…”

“You want to back out?”

“Yeah,” Sybil challenged. “Do you want to back out? Fuck, you’re making me horny just seeing you lying there naked, love. C’mon, ladies. Let’s help reassure her.”

“Wait, where are you going?? What are you doing??” But all three disappeared from view.

I started to hyperventilate. Then I felt hands all over my naked body… hands touching and caressing me. I shivered and moaned as I stared at the unmoving timer.

I felt hands on my ass, felt fingers spread my pussy lips open. “See how wet she is girls?” That was Renard’s voice.

“Renard, I’m not so s-sure…”

“Jeff, you want to start the timer for me? I’ll let you know when.”

“Sure thing, Renard.”

“R-Renard, I’m not…”

Hands rubbed all over me, giving me erotic tingles like you wouldn’t believe. Someone was touching my swollen nub, and it set me to whimpering. “Now, Jeff,” Renard stated. Then I felt a tongue on my pussy and clit. The snap of the latch into place set the timer to ticking my life away…

0:00:01… 0:00:02… 0:00:03.

I stiffened and mewled as someone began licking me out. I was wet as hell, both aroused and alarmed. That’s when I heard Kimberly say, “Damn. Renard really knows how to lick pussy!”

I tried to tell myself I was safe… that there was no way in hell the blade would come down this early in the timer and that I was just being anxious over nothing. But there was always that small chance I could be wrong. This wasn’t like that ride I’d taken last time just to show Prudence up with the timer already in the 50’s. And yet this ride felt even scarier.

I writhed and whimpered as Renard really licked me out. The ladies all murmured about his apparent skill and the way I was wriggling around. In front of me the timer reached 0:02:15 and kept going.

One of the hands left. Then Kimberly appeared in front of me with Jeff. She seemed astonished about the whole thing.

“Damn, Julie! What’s it like? You’re really wet as hell back there!”

“It’s s-scary as hell, l-love. And yet it’s… oh, FUCK!”

“She’s really wet back here, all right!” Sybil confirmed. Bettie added, “Damn; that’s sexy!”

The timer had just reached 0:04:02 when I stiffened. Then I was writhing as it flushed hotly through my body. Kimberly and Bettie both noticed in an instant… “Damn! Did she just cum??”  “She sure did!”  “Bloody hell, that’s hot!”  “Oh fuck! Now he’s going to fuck her!”

It was 0:04:37 when I felt Renard’s cock push its way inside me. I stiffened and moaned as he started to thrust. “That is so hot!” Kimberly breathed as she looked down on me.

Sybil laughed as she replied, “Why do you think all the girls love going for a ride?”

I looked up at the timer and watched as it went right on by 0:05:00. Were we still required to ride it for a minimum of five minutes? It made no difference to Renard as he fucked me right on past the minimum time in the guillotine.

I writhed and whimpered as the girls watched in awe. The guys never said a word. I realized I was totally exposed back there, my pussy no doubt fully visible to them while taking Renard’s cock.

I got more nervous the longer I rode the bloody thing. I also became incredibly aroused. The idea of that damned blade coming down at any moment had me in a heightened state of anxiety and excitement.

Renard picked up the pace as the timer reached 0:08:23. I gasped and whimpered, my eyes locked on the monitor in front of me as that bloody timer ticked the seconds of my life away. What if the blade decided to drop early while I was still locked in??

Renard really started fucking me hard. The ladies watched in awe with gasps of excitement. My eyes were locked on those bloody red digits on the monitor, wishing it would just…

I heard Renard cry out as his hot seed started to pump inside me. It set me off as I cried out in orgasm. It was so intense that everything went dark all around me.

Bloody hell; had it happened? Had my luck run out?? I was spasming as my senses tried to come back online.

I heard voices… “Damn, she came hard!”  “Can you believe it??”  “Wow! No wonder you bitches like to ride it!”  “What do you think, Kimberly?”  “I don’t know, Sybil. I just might have to think about it!”

My vision returned and I looked at the monitor with a sense of disorientation. The timer had stopped at 0:10:23. Then I felt someone freeing me from the straps.

“Are you all right, Julie? You were really out of it for a second there.”

“I th-think I’m ok, Renard.” I wasn’t sure, but at least it felt like I was still in one piece. My body was singing with erotic aftershocks.

I heard Bettie gasp, “Damn, Renard. Do you think… do you think I could take a ride?”

“Sure thing, Bettie. Just let me get Julie out of here. You can go next if you want. The risk is entirely up to you.”

(Oct 20 ’17)

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Confessions of a Realtor: Dorinda 2.7 (6)

Confessions of a Realtor: Dorinda

Dorinda was another client I ended up going the extra mile for. She was a businesswoman, and to be honest she initially came across as a little uptight. The house she wanted had to be perfect.

I showed her what I thought were quality locations. But nothing seemed quite right. She was so busy making decisions for her business that she seemed incapable of making one for herself, finding fault with just about everything.

I finally took her to the Ainsley house. I thought it would be ideal for her situation. But she didn’t agree, nitpicking every little thing.

It had a backyard soaking tub I thought would do her wonders after a long day at work. But that day I suppose I was thinking more of myself. I just wanted a nice soak before going home, especially after trying to deal with her many idiosyncrasies.

We were out back looking at the soaking tub when she finally gasped in exasperation, “What’s so great about this place, Rosanna?” For some reason she seemed uncomfortable calling me Rosie.

“To be honest, Dorinda, I was planning a little soak out here after we parted company. This is the last house I have to show today, and I wanted to get wet and soak for a while before going home.”

She was astonished. “Rosanna, you were actually going to use their hot tub? Do you have the Ainsley’s permission that?”

“I always check with my clients first, Dorinda. I tell them I like to use their tubs or pools if possible. That way if a buyer wants to know what it’s like, I have firsthand information to share with them. And I always pay for the upkeep while their house is on the market.”

She eyed me dubiously as though my conduct was unprofessional. Then she asked, “Have you been in their tub before?”

“A couple times already, Dorinda. Once I had a very trying day, so I came over and checked the place over. I checked the tub to make sure it was in good working order. Then I got in for a nice dip… ‘checking the water’ you might say.”

“You’ve got to be kidding me.”

“Not at all, Dorinda. Care to join me for a soak? I could use one right about now.”

It surprised her even more the way I was willing to get in while she was watching me. But I could tell she was actually thinking about it. I figured a soak would do her a lot of good… would probably do us both good.

Naturally she balked at the idea as she murmured, “Well I don’t know…” But that didn’t stop me.

“If the place interests you in the slightest, I see no reason why you shouldn’t try out the tub. You once told me your business can be quite stressful. A soak after work would be a great way to relax and shed the worries of the day.”

She went silent for a moment. But I could tell she was giving it some thought. Maybe it was because I was being so brazen, catching her off guard by taking the situation out of her control.

At that point I kind of took a chance with her. I started stripping out of my clothes until I was in my light blue bikini I’d deliberately worn underneath, choosing that particular color simply because she’d once told me she liked things that were light blue. Then I climbed down into the water and took up a seat.

For the first time since I’d known her she seemed not to know what to do next. She certainly was giving me the eye in my bikini. So I waved her to come on in.

“You’re welcome to join me if you want, Dorinda. We can discuss some of the finer points of what you’re looking for. A relaxing soak while going over your preferences won’t hurt anything.”

“But I don’t… I mean… I didn’t bring anything to wear.”

“No problem. You can dress down to your underwear if you want. Or you can just get naked if you don’t want any of your clothes to get wet. I certainly don’t mind.”

“I, uh… well, I… I suppose…”

She slowly undressed as though she was still trying to decide. Then she reached her underwear and stopped. I understood her hesitation when I saw she was wearing a lacy bra and panties that were probably a little pricey. So I smiled as I told her, “You can wear those or you can take them right off so long as you’re comfortable either way.”

To my surprise she stripped out of her underwear. Then she tentatively stepped naked down into the water. I reassured her by telling her I probably would have gone nude if I hadn’t planned ahead and worn my bikini under my clothes.

I must say I liked what I saw. Looks seemed important to her as she had a toned body that indicated she did a little working out. Maybe she felt she had to look perfect for her business contacts.

Her dark hair, C cups and neatly trimmed landing strip made my mouth water a little. But I wasn’t there to play. I was there to put her mind at ease while we discussed what she was looking for in a location.

We started talking about some of the little things she wanted in a home. As I listened, I realized the Ainsley house actually had much of what she was looking for. But I decided not to say anything to avoid embarrassing her.

During the three weeks we’d been together I’d gotten the impression she was into girls. I’d even gotten some subtle hints she might be into me. If possible I wanted to use that knowledge to help lower her barriers to be more comfortable in my presence without taking advantage of her.

There was a pregnant pause in our conversation. That’s when I told her I was looking forward to her leaving so I could spend some quality time in the tub. But I quickly reminded her she could stay and enjoy the soak for as long as she wanted.

She looked at me curiously. Then she asked, “What do you mean by ‘quality time’, Rosanna?”

“I don’t want to embarrass, offend or upset you, Dorinda. I was just looking forward to, well… getting off underwater… if you know what I mean.”

“Getting off??” At first she acted confused. Then it seemed to register.

She gasped incredulously, her eyes opening wide. “You mean to say you were going to, uh… seriously, Dorinda?? Have you done that out here before… gotten yourself off, I mean… right here in this very tub??”

“On a couple of stressful days, yes.”

She seemed astonished. Then her expression changed. I could tell she’d become a little curious.

“Uh… what did you do… er, uh… I mean… what DO you do in here… that is, if you don’t mind my asking?”

“Is it ok if I show you?”

“Of course.” Now she seemed really curious as she leaned forward, the anticipation showing in her features.

I felt a jolt of erotic tingles as I moved to the center of the soaking tub. Then I took a deep breath and submerged. I went down to the bottom on my back, released some air to help me stay down, and then started to grope and fondle myself all over.

At first she looked shocked. Then she appeared intrigued as she came away from her seat for a closer look. It turned me on knowing she was watching me as I touched myself.

I surfaced and gasped mightily for breath. She seemed impressed. “How long can you stay down?”

“Long enough to, uh… well, you know.”

“You mean… you mean you actually masturbate while holding your breath underwater??”

I smiled coyly. “You make it sound so dirty, Dorinda.” Then I chuckled as I added, “Sometimes I bring a toy to use on myself.”

“A toy??”

“Um – hmm.”

She paused for a moment. Then she revealed a hidden part of herself as she carefully asked, “You ever, uh… have you ever, uh… ever done it with another female… underwater, I mean?”

“Oh, I’ve played underwater with females a time or two, Dorinda… but not out here in the Ainsley tub. In fact you’re the first client who’s even asked about my proclivities… not that I mind sharing that information with you. Like I say, I thought it only fair you get to try out their tub in case you had any interest in their property. And as I mentioned before, I had planned on using it anyway after you left. So I’m glad you’re here enjoying a soak with me.”

It was a big moment for the two of us. I thought she was starting to open up to me. That way I could find out what she was really looking for in a home. If there was some subconscious blockage making it hard for her to choose a house, I hoped I might be of some service.

For a minute there I thought we might have a little fun loosening up. Maybe then I could learn why I had not succeeded in finding the right home for her. But her damned iPhone picked that moment to ring, and the mood was broken.

She blurted out an obscenity as she climbed out of the water to answer it. My heart sank, believing I’d lost the moment and was going to end up all the way back to square one with her. When she answered it, what I heard made it sound like work was calling her back.

I quickly got out and retrieved a couple towels. She hastily dried herself off. Amazingly she apologized for having to run off. It was the first time she’d ever shown me any consideration.

I smiled as I told her not to worry about it. But I was already anticipating the old, stiff Dorinda meeting up with me for our next series of home visits. The call had certainly come at an inopportune time… and in more ways than one.

Before she left she asked if I could show her the house again. I told her I’d be happy to show it to her at her earliest convenience. Then she startled the hell out of me by giving me a warm smile.

“Thanks, Rosie… I mean… you said I could call you Rosie, right?”

I was shocked. But I recovered quickly to give her my warmest smile. “Uh… certainly, Dorinda. Of course you can call me Rosie.”

“My close friends call me Dory. I think I’d like it if you’d call me that too… that is, if that’s ok with you, Rosie.”

“Certainly, Dory. You have my number, right? Give me a call when you have some free time and want to return to this house or go look at any others.” And with that she smiled and thanked me before turning and rushing off.

I sighed at the missed opportunity of soaking a little longer with her. But it felt like something had changed, especially now that she wanted to call me Rosie. Perhaps my prospects of getting her out of her shell and finding the right house for her were looking up…

I got a call from Dory a couple days later. She wanted to look at the Ainsley place again. And she wanted to see it after hours.

I told her that could be arranged. Then she caught me by surprise when she asked, “Rosie? Would it be ok if we tried the soaking tub again? I was thinking about what you said about relaxing in it after a stressful day. Maybe you could show me some of your, uh… ‘de-stressing techniques’?”

“Certainly, Dory. I’d be happy to show you what I do sometimes to relax.”

“Great? Tomorrow night? About 8:30?”

“I’ll meet you there, Dory.”

“Thanks, Rosie.” Then she ended the call.

I had a certain feeling of anticipation about her after that call. So on the night of our appointment I took a little something extra with me in my purse, just in case I needed to further break the ice. Then I drove over to the Ainsley house to meet her.

Her car was parked in their driveway when I got there. We went inside and I showed her throughout the empty house for a second time. This time she examined things with a different eye, renewing my hopes.

Issues I originally thought were deal breakers were now becoming not so critical. She told me what she liked about the place and how she thought she could make some things work. I got the distinct impression she was fighting with herself… as though she was trying to talk herself into buying something she really liked but that she couldn’t yet admit to herself.

She finally told me she wanted to see the soaking tub again. So we went outside. She murmured something about how she thought it might be really nice after a stressful day at work.

She paused for a moment as though embarrassed about something. Then she hesitantly asked if we could use it again. I told her, “No problem, Dory. Let’s get wet.”

I smiled encouragingly as I started to strip without the least hesitation. This time I took everything off. Her eyes lit up when she saw I was going in naked. Amazingly she did the same thing with only a minimal amount of hesitation.

We both got into the water together. Right away I noticed how hard her nipples had become. I got the distinct impression something interesting was going to happen between us before the night was over.

This time we sat closer together as she told me about the stresses of her job. She said she felt like she had to be in control the entire time. Sometimes she had moments where she didn’t want to make any decisions and that she just wanted to be told what to do for a change.

I’m not sure what it was that made me say it. I smiled with a chuckle as I told her, “You mean like if I were to tell you to come over here and kiss my nipples right this very minute?”

It was a flippant remark, thrown out there just to get a laugh and to further break the ice. But maybe a subconscious part of me was serious about it. Instantly I wished I wouldn’t have been quite so brazen.

To my astonishment she actually came closer. Dory got down into the water and started kissing and sucking on my nipples as she caressed me all over. She was sensuous and affectionate, and I moaned softly.

I looked at her and got this really wicked idea. “So you think this would be a great way to relieve stress, eh? Why don’t you show me? Dory, I want you to lie on your back on the bottom, hold your breath, and then touch yourself all over like I was doing the other day.”

What the hell was I thinking?? But the moment had presented itself. I’ve learned from past experience to seize the opportunity once it shows itself or it might be lost forever.

I watched in astonishment as she took a deep breath before going right under, bubbles trickling out of her nose. She laid flat on her back where she released more bubbles to stay down. Then she started rubbing herself.

I leaned over to watch, turned on like you wouldn’t believe. She touched and groped herself until more bubbles started coming up as her stomach rippled from her breathlessness. She finally came up gasping loudly for breath.

I smiled as I told her, “Not bad, Dory.” Then I seized the bull by the horns by asking, “So how good are you at eating things out underwater?”

I was taking quite a chance. But I was getting the impression she wanted me to dominate her, at least if I was reading her right. And after all, I wasn’t above being a little dominant so long as we both enjoyed it and got what we wanted.

She took a deep breath and then submerged with a burble. She moved into my crotch and started kissing and licking. I gasped and moaned, unable to believe a tightly wound business woman was doing such a great job eating me out underwater.

There was another eruption of bubbles before she finally came up panting quietly for breath. “Do I get a turn?” I asked carefully. She nodded her assent with a smile, her eyes flashing excitedly.

“Let me know if I cross any lines, Dory.” Then I allowed her to take a deep breath before I pushed her to the bottom on her back.

I went between her legs and started eating her out, sexy bubbles coming out of my mouth and nose. She moaned and bubbled as she writhed at the bottom of the soaking tub. It was such an incredible turn-on.

Her lungs were starting to heave when I let her surface. I gave her a few moments to catch her breath. Then I told her, “You’re going down again. This time I’m not letting you up until you make yourself cum. Understand?”

I held my breath, wondering if perhaps I’d pushed it too far. But she nodded with a flash of excitement in her eyes. Then I allowed her to get a good breath before I pushed her down.

She proceed to rub herself all over before she started fingering herself. I pushed down on her boobs, rubbing and squeezing them. She finger-fucked herself with one hand while rubbing her clit with the other.

I kept her down until her lungs started heaving. For a moment I thought I was going to have to let her back up before she orgasmed. Then she stiffened as she cried out.

She lost the last of her air as she shuddered hard. I could tell she was orgasming underwater. It was such an incredible turn-on that I nearly came myself.

I let her up and she came up panting wildly for breath. I told her, “Now it’s my turn, Dory. You’re not coming back up until you get ME off. Understand?”

Again I held my breath, wondering if I’d pushed too far. She just nodded her head. I no longer saw her as a businesswoman having to be in control all the time. Now I saw her simply as a woman wanting to be pushed around and dominated a little.

I went down to the bottom lying flat on my back. She came down between my legs and started licking me out. I grabbed her by her head, forcing her as I humped her face.

She was incredible; I never knew she had it in her! I made her stay down until I just couldn’t hold back any longer. Then I screamed my breath away in orgasm before we both surfaced.

We panted heavily for breath, our gasps echoing in the back yard. I told her, “That was incredible, Dory!” Then I grinned as I added, “I think you’ve earned a special reward.”

I climbed out of the tub and went over to my purse. I reached in and pulled out a nine inch dildo I’d brought with me. Then I smiled at her as I brought it back to the soaking tub.

She looked at it in astonishment as I stepped down into the water. Then I heard her quietly gasp, “I was hoping you might have brought along something like that.” Her words gave me an erotic jolt like you wouldn’t believe.

“Time for you to get fucked, Dory. I hope you can hold your breath. Otherwise you just might drown.” Then I started to push down on her chest.

She gasped as she willingly went down onto the bottom of the tub on her back. I went down with her where I slowly inched the dildo all the way into her pussy. Then I started fucking her with it… slowly at first, but then faster and faster.

I had her writhing like crazy as I occasionally took her clit into my mouth. Then she screamed her breath away from an incredible orgasm. I let her back up and we gasped for breath.

“My turn; ok?” I asked hopefully. “One last one and then I suppose we’d better be going.” Then I took a deep breath and went under onto my back.

She came down with the toy in her hand. She pushed it into my pussy and then proceeded to fuck me with it while nibbling on my nub. I was so horny that I went off like a firecracker.

We both surfaced and sat close to each other while catching our breath. I quickly slipped back into realtor mode by asking, “So what do you think of the place, Dorinda?”

She didn’t once hesitate. “Actually I think I’d like to make an offer on it, Rosanna. I think it’s going to suit me just fine.”

“That’s great. I just want you to have a place you’re going to be happy with.”

“Oh yeah. I think I’m going to enjoy this place… a lot.” Implied was the idea she might be spending a lot of her evenings out here getting rid of some stress, especially the way she looked knowingly at me.

We climbed out of the water, and I retrieved a couple of towels. We dried off and put our clothes back on. Afterwards she gave me a polite kiss on the lips.

“Thank you, Rosie.”

“My pleasure, Dory. I just want you to be happy in the right house.”

“I think this one will be just fine.” Then we headed out to our vehicles. The next day the Ainsleys accepted her offer…

© 2017 (written Oct 9 ’17 by riwa)

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Brother and Sister at the Snuff Club 6 4.3 (12)

(Time to post another chapter for you to enjoy. Sorry for the delay.)

6

At that moment it occurred to me I was standing there buck naked acknowledging all that applause. I don’t know why I suddenly became so self-conscious, considering everything I’d done right in front of everyone while hanging Emma. I decided it was time to get down off the stage and find my robe.

Stewart was down there in his robe clapping and smiling, my robe draped over an arm. Dorothy stood naked right next to him. She looked white as a ghost, perhaps over having just witnessed me hanging her sister.

Nearby I saw a woman in expensive black domination garb enthusiastically applauding my efforts. She was holding a leash attached to the collar of a naked woman in her late 20’s with large breasts and brunette hair. The leashed woman’s arms were behind her back – cuffed or tied, I presumed – and she had a red ball-gag in her mouth.

“Wonderful performance!” Monique said from behind me into my ear loud enough for me to hear. “One of the most erotic hangings I have ever witnessed.”

“Thank you,” I replied before I scooted for the steps leading down off the stage, suddenly wanting out of the spotlight.

I was almost there when I scanned the crowd. For a moment I thought I saw a familiar face that made me hesitate. Then I caught sight of Stewart coming to meet me with my robe.

Getting covered became a priority as I rushed down off the stage. I accepted it and hastily put it on as the nearby guests applauded my performance, causing me to blush again. I felt better once the robe was on.

I looked at the crowd, trying to spot that familiar face. I could have sworn I’d seen… Then I shook my head. It wasn’t possible.

“Damn, Janelle!” Stew gasped as he hugged me. “That was hot as hell!” That’s when it occurred to me I was super horny from my time up onstage. I needed to fuck again.

That woman in the black domination garb came right over with the woman on her leash in tow. She was dressed even more expressively than what Monique was wearing. “A wonderful performance, Miss. That was truly impressive. I don’t think I’ve ever witnessed a more erotic hanging.” I thanked her as I blushed again from her hungering look.

“Here at the Club they call me Mistress Chastity. I just love attending these sexy executions. You made my mouth water with the way you hanged her while licking her out. Whew; is it hot in here?”

She fanned herself as she smiled at me. The girl on the leash whimpered something. Mistress Chastity looked at her, tugged on the leash and then smiled at me.

“Where are my manners? I apologize. I forgot to introduce you to Clarinda. It seems she’s been a rather naughty attendant lately. She’s on probation as I haven’t decided what to do with her just yet.” Then she tugged on the leash again as she added, “Isn’t that right, Clarinda?”

The woman whimpered again as I looked at her admiringly. I liked her sexy body and her large breasts. Then Dorothy whimpered, causing me to look over at her.

Mistress saw me look at her and asked, “And who might this be?”

“This is Dorothy,” Stew said in reply. “We ran into her and her sister Emma alone in a snuff room. When Emma’s sensor popped, your attendant Nicole said we could hang her if we wanted to. And since my sis— er, uh… since Janelle here wanted to participate in a hanging, we thought we’d hang her out here on stage instead of in private.” He hesitantly added, “Nicole said there might be some sort of compensation?” I was glad he quickly corrected himself about us being brother and sister.

“Of course,” Mistress smiled in reply. “I was made aware of the situation at about the same time you were. Yes; if you check your pager it should show the appropriate change in your funds.”

Stew pulled it out of a pocket in his robe. His eyes lit up as looked at it in astonishment. Mistress Chastity looked alarmed as she added, “What… not enough?”

“My goodness… uh… no, Mistress. This is MORE than we were told we’d be receiving!” When he showed it to me I gasped at the additional $10,000 that had been added.

“I couldn’t help myself,” Chastity told us with a smile. “When I saw how erotically you hanged that lovely lady I just had to make sure the Club added a generous tip to the funds you’d been promised.

“Thank you so much!” I gasped happily.

“Oh, it’s my pleasure.”

I looked at Stew and he looked at me. Then we both looked at Dorothy standing there naked. She was trembling noticeably, her nipples hard and her pussy glistening.

“Is something wrong?” Mistress asked as she noticed our expressions.

“Uh… no, Mistress,” Stew told her. “It’s just that… we haven’t yet decided what we’re going to do with this one. Her sensor hasn’t popped so she’s not due for any kind of execution. We were so focused on her sister that we hadn’t even thought about what we’re going to do with her.”

“I see. Well, since she’s in your possession it’s totally up to you whatever you want to do with her.”

“You mean we could… I mean… we can snuff her if we want?”

I looked at Mistress in surprise, not expecting that. In the beginning I was kind of nervous when she came over and told us who she was. I thought maybe she was here to scold us or tell us we’d done something wrong.

“It’s entirely up to you,” she replied reassuringly. “Don’t let me sway you fine folks one way or the other. I’ve already gotten far more than I bargained for with your wonderful performance up onstage.”

I looked over to see Emma dangling there quietly. Her neck had lengthened as she hung there, and it gave me a surge of erotic tingles. Most of the area around the Entertainment stage had cleared out, the guests having gone back to their gambling or whatever the hell they were doing. Only a few were still loitering about.

Stewart pointed at the dead sister and asked, “Is she supposed to just… hang there like that?”

“We’re waiting until you folks are done or have left the Entertainment area. We don’t want to rush you or anything. We always leave them up until everyone leaves… unless requested otherwise.” Dorothy looked at her dead sister and whimpered through the ball-gag still in her mouth.

My brother asked, “So what do we do with this one, Janelle? I’m not really sure what to do with her. I don’t know if we should set her free, yet I’m not sure we should execute her either. What do you think?”

“I don’t know, Stew. I was too busy thinking about hanging her sister Emma. I’m not sure either.” I didn’t want to admit it to anyone, but I was kind of thinking about wanting to snuff her too.

“You folks seem uncertain whether to execute the remaining sister or let her go.”

Stewart looked at me and we both nodded before he answered, “I guess that’s right, Mistress.” But I wondered if maybe deep down he wanted to hang her or snuff her as well.

“I have a possible solution if you folks would like another option to consider.”

“What’s that?”

“You could let our roulette wheel decide the matter for you.”

She motioned over at the wheel where gambling had resumed. Monique was over there hovering over the other attendant who was taking bets and running it like she knew what she was doing. Stew and I looked over and then back at Mistress Chastity as she smiled helpfully.

“How would that work?” I asked curiously.

“It’s rather simple actually. We have the two colors: red and black. If one color comes up, she lives. If the other comes up, she dies.” She paused before conspiratorially adding, “We could even strap her down naked into one of the guillotines if you’d like.”

“Really? We could do that?”

“Mmm-hmm.”

Dorothy whimpered in alarm, her eyes flashing with fright at what Mistress was proposing. I looked at Stew and he looked at me. I could tell by the look in his eyes he was seriously considering the matter.

“Oh, it’s quite an erotic scenario,” Mistress went on. Then she looked at Stewart as she added, “You could even fuck the sister while the wheel is being spun. I’ve heard the way they clench with their cunts when they’re beheaded is an experience unlike anything you’ve ever felt before.”

I looked at Stew as an erotic thrill went down my spine. The idea of him fucking Dorothy when the blade came down on her neck really appealed to me. Besides, I wanted him to have some fun here at the Club. And since I’d already had mine I wanted to make sure he had some too before he hanged me.

“What do you think, Janelle?” he asked with growing excitement.

“I think you should do it, Stew! I got to lick Emma while she hanged! You should get to fuck Dorothy while she’s being beheaded!”

Dorothy let out another muffled grunt of alarm. Then I saw hesitation in Stew’s face. “Wait a minute, sis… er, uh… Janelle. Do you really think we should, uh… kill both sisters?”

I looked anxiously at Mistress. But there was no response at his slip of the tongue. Perhaps she hadn’t noticed.

Inwardly I breathed a little sigh of relief as I quickly replied, “You wouldn’t be killing her, Stew! It would be entirely up to the wheel! Isn’t that right, Mistress?”

“That’s exactly right. It would all depend on one spin of the wheel if you wish. The fact these two lovely ladies even set foot inside the Club indicates they knew the risks coming in.”

“Stew, I think you should do it!” Now I was really getting excited just thinking about it. Mistress seemed not to have caught Stew’s calling me “sis”. After all, I wasn’t sure if we were breaking any rules being here using the sex rooms as brother and sister.

Stewart still seemed a little hesitant. Then Mistress smiled at the two of us. “How about if I sweeten the pot?”

“Sweeten the pot?” he asked uncertainly.

“How about if Clarinda here joins you up onstage in the other guillotine? That way we’ll be guaranteed a beheading.” She tugged on her attendant’s leash for emphasis.

Clarinda stiffened as she let out a muffled grunt of alarm. I felt another erotic jolt at the idea of witnessing a live beheading. Stew was impressed as he blurted out, “Wow! You mean we’d be guaranteed a beheading for sure??”

Mistress smiled and nodded. “It’s my treat, especially after the wonderful performance you allowed me to witness this night.” Then she gave me a nudge as she added, “If you like, I’ll even let you fuck Clarinda here with a strap-on so you two can be together up onstage enjoying the moment.”

“Really??” Now I was stunned and breathless. Clarinda looked downright alarmed. And for a minute there I thought Dorothy was going to faint at what she was about to face.

“It would be my pleasure. Say the word, and we’ll make it happen. But don’t let me sway you. After all, the decision is totally up to you. I just want you to enjoy yourselves if you should decide to go through with it.”

“We’ll be naked onstage?” Stew asked nervously. But I was already starting to get excited and horny again.

“Naked and fucking a girl who might lose her head, Stew! It’s a win-win! If I can get naked again, you sure as hell can! Let’s do it!”

“Ok, Mistress,” he said with a nervous smile. “You talked us into it.”

Dorothy and Clarinda both grunted in alarm as their eyes flashed the horror of what they now faced. Mistress beamed from ear to ear as she clapped her hands together. “Splendid! I’ll alert Monique to bring the guillotines forward. You two choose who gets what color. If the marble lands on that color, they get to keep their head.” And with that she put Clarinda’s leash in my hand as she went over to the roulette wheel to get Monique’s attention.

I had Clarinda and Stew was holding Dorothy. Both naked women whimpered with fright. I could tell by the look in their eyes just how much they didn’t want to go through with this. But I was becoming more aroused by the minute.

I whispered to my brother, “Damn, Stew! Can you believe this?? Now we get to take part in an actual beheading!”

“What about Dorothy here, sis? Do you think it’s right we have a part in executing both sisters?” Apparently he was still trying to rationalize it to himself.

“You heard Mistress Chastity! They knew the risks coming in! Besides, it’s up to the wheel, remember? If we hadn’t walked into their room when we did, the Club probably would have executed both of them anyway!”

Dorothy whimpered into her ball-gag the way we were calmly talking about her fate. Clarinda grunted anxiously as she looked over at Mistress Chastity who was talking to Monique. I didn’t know what she’d done to be put on probation. But it was sure turning out to be one hell of a sexy night.

At that moment that red glow up in the ceiling came on. I hadn’t even noticed when it had gone off. Mistress and Monique came back over, the executrix all smiles.

“Returning to our Entertainment stage for seconds?”

“Oh yes, ma’am,” I replied with growing excitement. “That is, if it’s all right with you.”

“It’s perfectly all right with me and the Club, Miss! We want your visit with us to be special.”

I almost told her it was going to be perfect once I hanged for my brother. Instead I excitedly told her, “So far it’s been great!”

“Wonderful. Let’s get you all up onstage and get these lovely ladies strapped down to their guillotines.”

(Oct 31, ‘17)

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Trio (beheading) 4 (22)

He wasn’t in the house 10 minutes before they had him upstairs naked in their bed. It didn’t take long for his cock to harden as they did a sexy strip tease in front of him, fondling each other’s bodies and groping each other’s breasts. A moment later it became a competitive battle to see who could get onto the bed and get his hardened dick into her mouth first.

Suzanne won…

Suzi, however, was a generous soul. She allowed Michelle a healthy helping of man meat. Chelle sucked as though she hadn’t had “man sausage” in ages.

Suzi wanted a little tongue action. So she left his quivering cock in good hands. Chelle moaned hungrily as she took him into her mouth.

As Michelle licked, sucked and slurped, Suzi moved up and began nuzzling his neck, planting soft, wet arousing kisses. It caused him to shiver madly with desire. After all, she was supposed to be the one.

As Michelle sucked him down, Suzi plunged her tongue down his throat, probing excitedly. He moaned as he returned the gesture. His hand slithered around underneath her and started rubbing her ass.

Suzi finally got hungry for some man-meat. Chelle gleefully traded places with her. But instead of kissing him, she straddled his head, granting him access to her shaved, dripping peach. As he began to feast, his hands roamed upward until he found her gorgeous mounds.

Michelle began to moan excitedly as his tongue probed her cunt. She couldn’t help rocking on his face as he grabbed her butt. Meanwhile, Suzi sucked his throbbing manhood deep down her throat, moaning excitedly. She’d never tasted cock before and this was quite a treat. She was beside herself with excitement at making his cock spasm with her mouth and tongue.

“Oh, FUCK!” Chelle gasped.  “Mmmmm!” Suzi moaned, her pussy wet with excitement. Both ladies were thoroughly enjoying the newcomer.

“Oh, fuck… oh fuck… OH FUCK!” Michelle shuddered in orgasm, humping his face excitedly as a blinding flash of pleasure flushed warmly through her body. Suzi moaned again, her pussy dripping at the sound of her lover’s orgasm. It made her suck his cock harder, causing him to squirm.

“Oh, FUCK, BABE – you GOTTA check this out!” Michelle gasped delightedly. Suzi looked up at her, her eyes flashing as she licked the head of his dick. “I think he’s gonna cum soon,” she said with a wicked chuckle.

“SWITCH!” Suzanne yelled, and they quickly changed places. A moment later Suzi was straddling his face as she faced the headboard while Chelle took up the task of sucking on his quivering shaft. It was like he never stopped, simply exchanging one pussy for another. He gruntedas his tongue probed her cunt, causing her to moan as her head tipped back in pleasure.

“Oh, FUCK – that’s incredible!” Suzi gasped. A moment later his hands snaked up and began fingering her nipples. She moaned loudly, humping his face harder as her lover sucked him down. He began to grunt in ever increasing intensity. At the same time he started tonguing Suzanne harder as Michelle hungrily gobbled down his throbbing shaft.

As Chelle increased her action on his cock, he sucked on Suzi’s pussy with greater intensity, moaning and quivering and thrusting into her lesbian lover’s mouth with grunts of pleasure. At the same time, Suzanne began crying out as his tongue seemed to probe ever deeper into her blazing cunt… “Oh, fuck – oh gawd – oh FUCK!”

“UUNNGGHH!” …and his cock spasmed one final time, just before he erupted into Michelle’s mouth. She groaned excitedly. Since become Suzi’s lover it had been much too long since she’d tasted man-cum.

He closed his eyes and shuddered as he plunged his tongue deep into Suzi’s cunt. She stiffened and then felt a massive explosion go off inside her as her world went white-hot with a searing orgasm. Her back arched and she screamed as cum spewed out of her cunt, flooding all over his face.

Suzanne weakly climbed off and turned toward her lover. Michelle was grinning from ear to ear. “That was fantastic! He eats pussy almost as good as YOU do!”

“Maybe so,” Michelle said with a smile, “But I think I got the best meal of the day!”

“Fuck!” Suzi gasped. “And I missed it, too! Next time I get to swallow his cum!”

“Oh no. You want to ride his cock, Suz. That’s reserved for the basement.”

“That’s right. Fuck; I’m really looking forward to it.”

He looked at them both with dismay. “Right now, ladies?”

“Right now, Raymond. You agreed, remember. Everything all set? All your affairs in order?”

He nodded. Then he asked, “Will I get to fuck a pussy?”

“Of course you will. That’s the agreement, right? You’ll be the first cock Suzi ever takes in her sweet snatch! We promised; remember?”

He nodded. “Ok, ladies. I’m ready.”

The women got up and excitedly led him downstairs to the basement. The frame came into view and he gasped. Seeing it scared him while at the same time giving him an erection.

“We’re really looking forward to this,” Michelle told him.

“Yes we are,” Suzanne added. “We got this all set up the moment we knew you were coming.”

Their hands roamed his naked body as he stared at the guillotine. So they were really going to behead him for letting him be the first cock Suzi had ever taken up her cunt, eh? Well, he’d certainly agreed to this.

The ladies became all breathless and aroused. Their hands were all over him, both of them gushing how this was going to be so exciting. Then he asked, “So how’s this going to happen?”

“Oh, we already decided Suzi will be riding you the moment the blade falls. You’ll be her first, remember? If we like it, we’re liable to try this again someday. Now get on your back like a good little snuff-toy, Raymond.”

He laid on the cushioned bench on his back. The ladies slid him through and then brought down the lunette over his neck. Looking up he saw the blade dangling ominously above his head.

“What about my arms, ladies?”

“You promise not to try to lift the lunette off your neck or to stop your beheading?” They were now sitting down on either side of him, one of them stroking his cock. He couldn’t see so he wasn’t quite sure which one it might be.

“I promise.”

“Then you get to do this.” That’s when they took his hands and put them on their breasts.

He felt them both up, fondling and caressing them as they played with his cock. They moaned with delight as they stroked him. They even moved his hands so he could feel their wet, dripping slits.

The closer the big moment came, the more turned-on they seemed to become. “Jerk your meat for us, Raymond; Ok?” So he reached down to masturbate as they leaned over and kissed each other. Then they each took a turn sucking on him.

He began to thrust into their mouths as they took turns. “I think he wants your pussy, Suz. His cock acts like he wants to fuck.”

“Yeah, I’m definitely ready to fuck, ladies.”

“Go for it, Suz! Now’s your big moment!”

Suzanne straddled his cock. Then she slowly inched him into her pussy while holding onto her hips. “Fuck; is THIS what it feels like?”

“That’s what it feels like, Suz!” Michelle giggled.

“Gawd, this isn’t like your strap-on at all!”

“No, it’s not!”

Suzanne began bouncing up and down on his dick. He used the freedom of his hands to reach up and caress her boobs. She gasped with delight, enjoying her first male.

“Fuck, Chelle… you gave this up for me??”

“That’s ‘cause I love you so much, Suz. I love you enough to do this for you. Now let me know when you’re about ready to cum, ok?”

Suzanne nodded as Michelle stepped up to the lever. Raymond gasped, his cock stiffening even more inside her. Suzi gasped, “Oh fuck; I think he just got bigger in me!”

“Let me know when you’re ready, Suzi. I want you to have the best ever.”

Raymond looked up at his executioner and nervously asked, “What happens to my uh… well… you know?”

“Oh we’re keeping your head, Raymond. I want Suz to remember you! But your body goes to a cannibal group we know. They’ll be here as soon as we call them. But we’ll probably have some fun with your body first.”

“Fun? What kind of fun?”

“Oh, you’ll find out.”

Suzanne began eagerly bouncing up and down. “Fuck, this feels… ohmygawd, Chelle! This feel so fucking… I can’t believe a man’s cock is going to make me…!!”

“Are you going to cum, Suz?”

“Just about!”

Michelle leaned down and kissed Raymond on the lips before telling him, “Thanks for doing this for Suz and I.” Then she giggled. He gulped anxiously as he gasped for breath, his cock swelling even more inside her as he sensed his life was about to end.

“Oh fuck! Fuck; I’m going to… OHMYGAWD, CHELLE; I THINK I’M GONNA…”

“Bye, Raymond,” Michelle said as she pulled the lever. The blade fell with frightening speed, bottoming out with a loud THUNK. A moment later his head just wasn’t there anymore as it dropped into a waiting wicker basket.

His body jerked upward as though he was trying to fuck Suzanne in return. She let out a cry as she started to climax. Feeling his cream erupt inside her sent her right into orbit.

She became dizzy and disoriented as the orgasm just kept rolling and rolling inside her. Her cunt instinctively squeezed around the dick inside her as he kept hitching and spasming. “Gawd; he’s spurting so much inside me, Chelle!” And with that she went off again.

She cried out as she started to fall over. Michelle pulled his head up so he could see what was going on, briefly kissing his lips. Then Suzanne fell off, tumbling onto the floor in a blissful haze.

Michelle took advantage of the situation by climbing aboard and taking his cock inside her. He was still hard and twitching. Fuck; it felt good!

Delirious with pleasure, she kissed his lips again. Then she mashed his face down against her crotch near her swollen nub as much as she could. It triggered an orgasm of her own.

For the next couple of hours the girls used his head to get them off, mashing his lips against their swollen cunts. They sucked his cock as hard as they could get it before trying to ride it again. But eventually no amount of sucking could get a rise out of the corpse anymore.

They finally called that cannibal group who came and took the body away. But the head went in a special place. Afterwards they often looked at it for inspiration, resulting in them falling into such an aroused state that they had to fuck each other silly while he silently observed their lovemaking. Then they began considering the possibility of allowing another man to come over. Maybe this time they could pretend Michelle was the one who’d never taken a cock before to sell him on the idea of a beheading in exchange for breaking in a lesbian.

© 2006; 2017 (written Jun 6 ’06; ed. Dec 31 ‘17 by riwa)

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Matt and Denise – the spanking 4.3 (8)

Matt was sitting on the couch in his denim shorts when his wife Denise came out in her sexy lingerie. “Hi, babe!” she grinned as she wiggled her ass in front of him. “Wanna get lucky?” He turned her around, ran a hand along her leg and swatted her ass… SMACK!

She whimpered and then said, “What was THAT for?”

“You’re being naughty… you’re turning me on!”

SMACK!

She whimpered excitedly. “Who… ME?!”

Matt stared at her gorgeous ass. ‘If she’s gonna wiggle it in front of me, then I’m entitled,’ he thought.

SMACK!

Denise whimpered again and then giggled as she started to walk away. “I got laundry I’ve got to do right now…” she started to say.

Matt grabbed her. “Oh NO, you don’t! You can’t come in here, turn me on, and then walk away! You’re not getting off THAT easy!” Then he pulled her down onto his lap on their leather couch and proceeded to spank his naughty wife… SMACK!    SMACK!   SMACK!

She whimpered, wiggled and squirmed. The pain was making her hot and wet. She loved it when he spanked her.

She playfully started to get up off the couch. “You done spanking me, big boy? I gotta do some laundry now!”

“You’re not going anywhere!” he stated as he pulled her back down onto his lap, “…not until I’m done with you!”

SMACK!    SMACK!   SMACK!

He pulled her lingerie off. Then he spanked her until her ass got red. She moaned as he rubbed her butt, allowing his fingers to roam dangerously close to her pussy.

“You through having your fun, big boy?” she breathed huskily.

“Just getting started, you naughty slut!”

SMACK!

She whimpered and then replied, “I am NOT a slut!”

“You wander in here, wiggle that nice ass of yours in my face, turn me on, and then tell me you’re going off to do clothes?!”

SMACK!

“Oooooohhhhh!”

“That MAKES you my slut… my naughty little slut! You’re turning me on, my naughty little slut!”

SMACK!

“Oooooooohhhh! I am NOT… (SMACK) oohh… your naughty… (SMACK) oooooo… little slut … (SMACK) OW!”

Matt started rubbing her ass, making her moan excitedly. She loved the feel of his hands on her butt. She was getting wetter by the minute.

SMACK – “Oooooohhhh…”  RUB – “Oh, yeeaahhh…” SMACK – “OW!”  RUB – “Oooooooo…”

He grabbed her ass cheeks and spread them wide, exposing her shaved pussy and clit. She moaned excitedly, thankful that she’d turned him on. She’d get to the laundry in due course.

“Does that make you feel better?” She playfully teased him. “Does it make you feel like a man to beat up on a poor, helpless woman like this?”

SMACK! She winced and moaned again.

“You naughty little slut! I’ll teach you to tease your man!”

SMACK!  SMACK!  SMACK!

She whimpered again and grabbed her ass with her hand, trying to keep him from giving her those exquisitely, painful swats that were making her oh-so-hot.

He looked down appreciatively at her sweet little caboose and raised his hand. He’d wait her out!

She rubbed her sore butt and waited, but he did nothing.

Maybe he was gonna stop now.

She carefully removed her hand and got ready to get up from the couch…

SMACK!

She whimpered like a little girl and grabbed her butt again…

“Ok. That’s enough. I really gotta get those clothes done…”

She rose up, but he pushed her back down onto the couch. “It’s enough when I SAY it’s enough,” he told her firmly.

SMACK!

“OUCH!!”

Then he started rubbing her ass all over… grabbing, fondling and caressing… allowing his fingers to drift over her pussy lips.

She shivered and then moaned softly. She gasped when he slid two fingers into her pussy and started probing her wet cunt. “Oooooooooohhhhhh…” She squirmed helplessly as he finger-fucked her.

“What are you doing?” she trembled.

“Showing you what happens when you tease your man!” Then he thrust his fingers hard inside her, causing her to stiffen and cry out in excitement.

‘I gotta get him back,’ she thought desperately. She suddenly came off the couch, pulled down his shorts and underwear and then took him deep into her mouth.

“OOOOOOOHHHHHHH…” He moaned weakly as she sucked him down; shivered helplessly as she ran her tongue along the head of his shaft before she took him so deep into her mouth that the tip of his cock touched the back of her throat.

As Matt cried out in ecstasy, Denise started bobbing her head up and down on his shaft. She moaned pleasurably, making him groan from the buzz of her mouth on his cock. He gasped and moaned as she sucked him like a woman possessed.

“So I’m your slut, eh?” she said to him. “Well then… your slut wants your cock in her mouth!” She sucked him hard, making him moan and squirm helplessly.

“Spank me hard, will ya?” she gasped as she got a breath. “Well then I’ll just fuck your cock with my mouth!” She bobbed up and down rapidly, causing him to cry out and shiver in excitement.

‘I gotta do something quick,’ he thought with desperation. ‘She’s making me feel too good!’

As she came up for a breath, he suddenly pushed her onto the couch on her back. Then he found her crotch with his mouth and started licking like crazy. He rapidly flicked his tongue out against her clit. “OH! OH! OH! OH!” she gasped weakly as his tongue drove her to ecstasy…

Flick, flick, flick… then he licked her pussy lips.

“OOOOOOOHHHHHHH!” She tipped her head back and gasped excitedly as the orgasm built within her. She squirmed and wiggled as his tongue pleasured her…

“AAAAAUUUUUUUGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!” She cried out as her orgasm washed over her like a tidal wave. She shuddered mightily as the pleasure swept through her until it left her breathless, panting heavily. Matt just flicked his tongue against her clit again, sending her into another series of spasm.

“I’ll… get you for that!” she gasped at her husband. Then she climbed into his lap, centered her pussy opening against the head of his shaft and impaled herself on his hard, throbbing cock.

Matt tried to gasp for breath at the pleasure of his wife’s pussy on his meat. But she suddenly pressed her lips against his and kissed him fiercely, leaving him breathless. She started humping him, bouncing up and down on his shaft.

He groaned into his wife’s mouth as her tongue probed his. He squirmed excitedly as her pussy slid up and down onto his shaft.

“I want your fuckin’ cock… mmmmm… in my pussy… mmmm… I wanna fuck your hard cock… gimme your fuckin’ cock… mmmmm…”

As she fucked him and talked dirty to him Matt felt himself shiver all over. He loved it when his wife acted like his personal slut. She was a sexual hottie!

Denise sucked her husband’s tongue into her mouth and moaned excitedly as her pussy swelled from the cock that was filling it. She groaned hungrily and forced herself onto his throbbing shaft, impaling herself onto it as deep as it would go. She gasped as he sucked on her nipples. She began to quiver as tingles radiated outward in every direction…

Matt played with his wife’s ass as he tongued her nipples, pulling each one deep into his mouth. He rolled each one around between his lips, causing her to moan excitedly.

Denise felt her orgasm gush upward from somewhere deep inside her. It boiled over, causing her to cry out in ecstasy as her husband hungrily nibbled on her tits. She shivered like crazy. It felt like her husband’s cock was filling her to overflowing and it was driving her wild.

She came down from her orgasm, only to have him swat her on her already stinging ass… SMACK! She whimpered excitedly and then started to tremble as another orgasm overtook her. She cried out and shuddered as pleasure washed over her. When it passed, she gasped for breath, panting heavily…

SMACK! “Naughty little slut!” SMACK! “My naughty girl needs a spanking for teasing me!” SMACK! “This’ll teach my naughty slut a lesson!” SMACK! “Naughty, naughty girl!” The pain tingled in her ass, causing her to whimper deliciously. Then he started thrusting up into her…

HARD!

“OH – OH – OH -OOOOHHH…” As he sucked on her nipples another orgasm exploded inside her as though it originated from her tingling ass. She cried out and shuddered as he thrust his cock up inside her.

She was just coming down from the plateau of pleasure when she heard him grunt… felt his cock shiver inside her. SMACK! “NAUGHTY LITTLE SLUT!” he cried out. Then she felt the warmth of his cum fill her as he came inside her.

She didn’t have time to catch her breath. Another orgasm slammed into her and shook her as her husband emptied himself inside her throbbing cunt. They cried out together, caught up in the throes of orgasmic pleasure. Then she collapsed into his arms, completely spent…

© 2004 (written Nov 1 ‘04 by riwa)

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The Contest 3.2 (5)

1

My chest feels near to bursting but I must not give in. I must outlast Afya or I will not hear the end of it. So I swallow my mouthful of air and increase my resolve despite my agony.

My vision is imperfect but I can just see Afya under the water across from me. Yasmeen pushes upon her shoulders to help keep her down, just as Haifa pushes upon mine. But I know she is determined to defeat me and I must be strong if I am to triumph.

The other maidens in the harem cheer us on as they wager on the contest. I detect more voices in support of Afya but I am not surprised. It just causes my beloved Haifa to cheer me on all the louder… “Stay strong, Jamilah; you can do it! She is tiring!”

“She is NOT!” Yasmeen responds angrily. “She will outlast Jamilah; you will see! You will ALL see!”

My chest heaves and I feel a growing dizziness inside me. Bubbles escape my lips and nose; I cannot help it. My stomach heaves as though something inside wants out. I cannot last much longer.

I see a sudden burst of bubbles where Afya kneels. We are near the edge of the harem pool facing each other, thankfully not in deeper water. But the shallows are more than sufficient for our contest, a contest that is about to come to an end one way or another.

I lose another burst of bubbles and I feel a fire in my chest. I cannot continue much longer; I will need to rise out of the water in mere moments. I am defeated and a heaviness settles upon me.

Just once I wish I could defeat Afya at a contest and silence her many derisions upon me. Just once I wish to be something worthy in her eyes. In desperation I shoot up a silent prayer.

…and just like that I witness a great burst of bubbles. Afya flails her arms in desperation to push her closest ally off. Yasmeen cries out, “Afya; NO!” but it is too late. Afya bursts up out of the pool and I hear her loud gasps.

Allah be praised.

“Jamilah, you have WON!” Haifa declares proudly and she releases me. But a great dizziness engulfs me. I am suddenly too weakened to rise up. Haifa grasps my arms and pulls me up until my head is out of the water and I am coughing greatly.

I hear murmurs of surprise from the gathered harem; my victory is unexpected. “Pay your wager!” Haifa declares to a sullen Yasmeen. She reluctantly parts with a treasured ornament, slapping it angrily into Haifa’s palm. Then Haifa turns to me, all smiles.

“Jamilah, I KNEW you could do it!” she declares proudly. I am still shaking water out of my eyes, still coughing so that I may recover. Then I peer over at Afya.

I am surprised to see newfound respect in her eyes…

2

With the victory comes a change in Afya’s treatment of me. She has special favor with the King and receives many gifts from him, one of which she gives to me as a sign of her great respect. She includes me in her inner circle and even seeks my wisdom from time to time, something she has never done before.

More importantly to me, she treats my beloved Haifa with more respect. Haifa has always been wary of the shadowy Afya. In private she tells me that she still does not totally trust the King’s favorite. But I see Haifa is slowly warming up to her.

Soon Afya begins speaking to me about a man outside the palace named Ghazi. She tells me she is in love with him and tries to see him as often as she can. She tells me her heart is torn because her life in the palace forbids such things and she seeks my wisdom on the matter. I feel it is a great honor that she seeks my counsel.

Once I actually accompanied her outside the palace walls so that she could see her Ghazi. I witnessed them together and they seemed to have a great fondness for each other. He is a young man, a strong-looking man, and he was quite eager to see her.

I become her closest companion; it happens so quickly. We bathe and play in the harem pool together and we share many things. It is a good life, one I could not possibly have imagined before the contest in the pool.

It is so subtle that I do not see it. I am so thrilled to be close to Afya that I fail to notice she is slowly weaning me away from my beloved Haifa. A certain sadness develops in Haifa’s eyes, a sadness I am too blind to detect. I am so close to Afya now that all I see in Haifa’s eyes is the green monster of jealousy. And I fail to see that Afya’s treatment of Haifa has now returned to the days before the contest…

3

One evening Afya comes to me alone. She is greatly distressed, for the King has detected a plot against the throne. He has issued a decree that there be no more journeys outside the palace walls for the harem and the guards.

“Jamilah, whatever shall I do?” she tells me, appearing as though her heart will break. “I cannot set foot outside the palace until the King rescinds his decree. I must see Ghazi!”

“There is nothing to be done but to obey the King’s command,” I tell her, sighing heavily. But she shakes her head, telling me there is another way.

“The tunnel to the harem pool goes outside the palace,” she whispers in hushed tones. “When they fill the pool it flows in from the river. And when they drain the pool it flows back. We can take the tunnel.”

“Afya, that is madness!” I declare in horror. “The tunnels are too long to make that distance under the water! And we must not go outside the palace walls!”

“But I must see Ghazi!” she insists. “Surely he is worried about me!” Then she looks at me with great determination.

“I will swim the tunnel, Jamilah. And I want you to swim with me. Your victory in the contest means you can be under longer than I. You can help me make it to the river; I know you can. And Ghazi will be waiting for me.”

My heart leaps in my chest in alarm; what she is proposing is sheer folly! “Afya!” I tell her anxiously. “If we are caught we will be executed!”

“We will not be caught!” she replies, sounding exceedingly desperate. “All I require is that you see me through to the outside. Please, Jamilah, I have learned to trust you in many things. Please allow me to trust you now in this matter.”

There is a flicker of something in my ear… like a feather in the wind. It is the faint voice of Haifa, quietly whispering to me of a time so long ago when she was not sure how much she could trust Afya. Even now she still harbors her doubts. But my closeness to Afya is something I cannot risk breaking.

Once I agree to the tunnel swim, Haifa’s warning in my ear goes away like fleeing clouds after a great storm. But I am still unsettled…

4

There is no one around when we enter the room and creep toward the harem pool. It is dark save for two torches and we are clothed with only a thin tunic so as not to hinder our journey. All of this adds to my unsettled state and my heart beats loudly.

“Are you sure of this?” I ask Afya. “If the journey is too long we will not survive in the tunnel.”

“There is a break in the tunnel for the servants to gather water inside the palace,” she tells me. Then she smiles confidently in the faint glow of the two torches.

“We can make it, Jamilah!” she declares. “Remember how you bested me in the pool? Together we shall breach the palace wall.” Then she grabs my shoulders, pulls me to her and hugs me. How can I refuse with such an intimate gesture on her part?

We quietly enter the pool, making our way toward the tunnel entrance. I do not know how much of the tunnel is underwater, nor do I know where that break in the tunnel lies. I can only hope Afya knows what she speaks of. With our recent change in relationship, I am fully committed to her.

“It is so dark,” I whisper quietly.

“That is good,” she replies in a soft voice. “We must not be seen. Come, Jamilah; we must go now.” Then she pushes me forward as though I must go first.

I gasp, swelling my chest as much as I am able. Then under I go for the tunnel entrance in the pool. I have seen it many times before and have even gone under and through for a very short distance just to see what is there. But this swim will be so much more.

I use my arms and kick with my legs, all the while questioning what I am doing. The tunnel is dark as night and I use my arms to feel my way forward. Sometimes I feel a hand on my foot and I know it is Afya close behind. I am afraid, but I must make sure neither of us dies in here.

The tunnel goes on and on and there seems to be no change of darkness. Soon my chest begins to heave as bubbles leak out of my mouth, and I spur myself onward. I know we cannot remain under the water’s surface much longer.

I hear Afya grunt, a troubling sound that matches my own grunts. I feel my way forward, pushing off the sides of the tunnel from time to time. We must be near that break in the tunnel ahead or we will surely be found here come morning.

I peer forward, the water interfering with my vision. But I think I see something up ahead. Is it getting lighter?

Hope springs within me and I kick as hard as I can, using my arms to move forward. My chest strains and I feel a growing fire inside as more bubbles slip out of my mouth. If we do not reach that break in the tunnel soon…

I cannot stay down much longer and I become greatly afraid. I swim even harder until I see a glow before me. I swim for it until I am forced to go up, tunnel or no.

My head comes out of the water and I gasp loudly. We are in the break in the tunnel and a single torch shines down upon me. Then I turn for Afya only to hear her come up beside me, her gasps matching my own.

It was a long swim, and we struggle to calm ourselves and remain quiet. But soon we have recovered and are no longer gasping in agony. “I told you we could do it, Jamilah,” she whispers confidently. “Just a little more and we will be outside the palace.”

“Madness,” I mutter under my breath. Haifa’s warning voice returns to my ear, louder and more insistent. But I brush it aside like brushing away flies buzzing around my face. I am too committed to Afya to stop now.

“Quickly!” she hisses into my ear. “We must go NOW!” I nod in the near darkness, wishing we could take the torch along to light our way. Then I gasp as I go under toward the rest of the tunnel that awaits our passage.

It is a long swim – a hard swim – a swim made much more difficult at night. I am pushed by my desire not to be found in the tunnel at sunrise. That would be a great humiliation, a betrayal to the King and a failure to keep Afya safe.

The tunnel is dark, seemingly never-ending. I feel my chest begin to hurt again and the fear grows within me as more bubbles escape my mouth. Like the contest, my stomach soon feels as though something inside wishes to burst forth. It feels like flames are burning within my chest and I fear we will never make it. Then I see a glow ahead.

Is it another torch? I do not know. All I know is that I must get out of this water… that WE must get out of this water.

I push hard, sometimes feeling Afya’s hand brush against my feet. I hope I have not kicked her as I force myself forward, telling myself we will be outside the wall if only I will push myself on a bit more. Then the glow gets stronger and I sense the opening to the tunnel is near.

I grunt in growing alarm; Afya’s grunts behind me fail to comfort me. Then with one last, hard kick I see a surface above me. I go up and am greatly relieved to be able to stick my head up and gasp aloud. Afya comes up right next to me and her gasps unite with mine.

We look around and I discover we can see by the light of the moon, the light I saw while swimming forward. We are beyond the palace walls. But toward the river I see a man waiting and I stiffen in alarm. Thankfully it is only Ghazi and he rushes toward us.

He pulls Afya out of the water channel and holds her tight. She wraps her arms around him and they rejoice that she is unharmed. Then she comes over to me and I see a serious look in her face. It is as though her behavior toward me has changed.

“Go back now, Jamilah. You got me here and for that I am grateful. You will be rewarded. Now go! Go back and go to sleep. I will be well.”

I look at her in confusion, surprised to be dismissed from her presence so casually. Something does not feel right, but I cannot put my finger on it. “Will you be ok?” I ask, still feeling responsible for her safety.

“I will see to her care,” Ghazi tells me. “You should go back now. We are in your debt.”

“Yes, go,” Afya tells me. “You should not be here should someone see us together. Do not worry; I will be well.”

“As you wish,” I reply uncertainly. Then I start gasping for breath to prepare myself for the return trip. I have no idea why I suddenly sense it is much safer within the palace walls. But I fervently wish to return there as soon as possible and I gasp one last time before I go under…

5

I arrive back at the harem pool exhausted. The room is empty and I quickly dry myself off. Then I slip into the room with the other sleeping maidens.

I try to sleep but it does me no good; my mind is troubled. I see Afya has not returned; where could she be? I toss and turn, sensing something is not right. I finally drift off to sleep, dreaming of the agony of being in the tunnel for so long.

Sometime during the early morning I am awakened by a disturbance within the palace walls. I hear faint voices… and is that the clash of sword upon sword? It is the sound of battle and it awakens us all, causing everyone to sit up and take notice with anxious murmurings.

I look around, only to see that Afya has still not returned. In the faint light of the sunrise I see Haifa’s anxious expression. She is worried; we all are.

The sounds die off and we look around at each other in curiosity. The commotion has ended; what do we do now? There is no one who summons us so one by one we lie back down and drift off to sleep…

6

It is a troubling dream…

I am below the surface of the water in the harem pool, straining with all my might. I sense I am being held down; is this another contest? Then I realize it is no contest at all, not with the other maidens pushing me down and refusing to allow me back up.

I am almost about to give up and succumb when the Queen’s guards burst in, ordering us all to awaken. I am grateful for my horrible dream to be interrupted. But the King has summoned us to the courtyard at once and I am alarmed. What could this possibly be?

We dress quickly in our tunics and head down the passage to the courtyard. Afya is still not with us and I worry about her now more than ever. Haifa gives me an anxious look, one that mirrors my own.

We assemble in the courtyard where many of the palace guards have also gathered. There is blood upon the ground; a battle has been waged here not so long ago. And several of the guards who are normally here are now missing; I know not why.

This is often used as a place of judgment, and I see it is to be so this morning. The King and Queen sit upon their chairs, both appearing somewhat shaken. Several guards bear wounds and bandages. Something has happened, although we dare not speak aloud to ask questions.

The King looks at us and he no longer appears to be shaken. Fury has filled his features. For some reason I am frightened now more than ever.

“There was an attempt upon our lives this morning!” he declares, rousing horrified gasps from among us maidens. “The Queen was nearly killed and I suffered a glancing blow. Several palace guards died to protect us. But the rebellion has been defeated. Now the leaders shall suffer punishment.”

He turns to one of the guards standing near a doorway. “Bring them in!” he commands and the guard disappears. When he returns I am horrified to see Afya and Ghazi escorted in with two executioners in black hoods on either side, both brandishing scimitars.

Both are bloodied; it looks as though they have been wounded. There is rage on their faces and a gasp of shock fills the courtyard at this unexpected betrayal. Haifa glances at me in alarm as I feel a sickness rise up from my stomach.

“These two have led a rebellion!” the King proclaims. “They would have succeeded were it not for the providence of Allah! All of their conspirators are dead save for these two! Now they shall suffer punishment for their sins!”

My stomach churns as Afya and Ghazi are forced to kneel facing away from the King and Queen. Their tunics are torn away, leaving them to be executed naked and in shame. Their bodies are bloodied and it makes me wonder if their executions have been hastily arranged before they can die from their wounds.

Even with her breasts exposed, Afya kneels proudly. I await her accusation of my complicity in the plot by swimming her outside the palace walls. But she says nothing; she just looks forward as though accepting her fate.

Both executioners lift their scimitars in preparation. Ghazi’s strikes first and his aim is true. Ghazi’s head flies across the courtyard as blood spurts out of his severed neck to add to the crimson stains upon the floor. He slowly slumps over, no more to be able to start a rebellion.

There is only a pause before Afya’s executioner swings his scimitar as well. She has just enough time to see the head of her Ghazi fly before it passes right through her neck, causing her head to fly forward as well and to roll upon the courtyard floor. Her body shakes before it too topples over onto its side.

“Post the heads!” the King declares and I understand immediately what he means. Both heads will be impaled on pikes and posted outside the palace for all the citizens of the city to see. Then he tells the guards to take the bodies beyond the city gate and leave them for the birds to feast upon.

Haifa looks at me aghast and I read her fearful gaze. My stomach churns and I feel deathly pale. But there are no more executions and the King dismisses us for the day.

I cannot help but sense I am now living moment by moment… as though each one might be my last…

7

I tell no one of my swim in the tunnels with Afya, not even to Haifa. But for the rest of the day I feel a heavy weight upon me. It is as though Allah has looked down upon me with disfavor.

Every time a guard approaches I steel myself for the worst. But each time his duties take him away from me. My nerves are frayed and I am always on edge.

Later in the day Haifa takes me aside and asks me about Afya. I tell her I know nothing, that I was aware of nothing. But it all makes sense to me now. She needed someone to make the swim with her to be reunited with her fellow conspirator. I feel like a marked woman.

The Queen makes an unexpected appearance in our quarters at sundown. Two of her guards flank her and I feel that churning in the pit of my stomach again. Then she walks right up to me.

She stares at me, not speaking so much as a word. Then her face contorts in a rage as her hand flies. I receive a stinging slap to the face, a loud slap.

The girls around me gasp in shock and horror. But I fully understand its purpose and with a broken heart I accept it in silence. With a nod her guards then step on either side of me and escort me away.

I’m actually relieved the waiting is finally over…

8

The only light in the cavern is what comes from the torch on the wall outside my cell. I’m given no food or water, just the tunic upon my back. It’s cold and I’m all alone.

I tell myself there is no one else to blame for my misfortune. Haifa had it right all along; Afya was not to be trusted. But I allowed her to draw me in and now I shall pay for submitting to her rebellious whims with my life.

My biggest regret is that I’m going to miss Haifa. Already I’m missing her warmth and comfort, especially the way she consoles me when I am sad. But I willingly gave up that warmth and special attention when I threw my lot in with Afya. It was a poor decision… and a costly one.

There is a clank at the cell door and I peer intently. But it is so dark I cannot see anyone. Then I hear a familiar voice…

“Jamilah?”

“Haifa? Is that you?”

“I am here, Jamilah. Speak out in the darkness and I shall draw near to you.”

Tears fill my eyes, tears of sadness and regret. Then a new fear fills me, a terror that grips my soul…

“No, Haifa! You must not be here! I do not wish you to suffer for my sins!”

“Hush, my beloved.” Then she is right here with me, her hands caressing me.

“No,” I sob. “You mustn’t. The guard…”

“…has done me a favor, Jamilah,” she whispers tenderly. Then her lips find mine. My tears flow like rain as I succumb, allowing her to embrace me.

She slowly removes my tunic, lifting it above my head. Then her lips are all over my body, all over my heaving breasts. She comforts me as only she can.

After a time of caresses and tenderness she pauses, allowing me to catch my breath. I feel so much better now. But the news she brings is just as I suspected.

“Yasmeen told the Queen about your swim,” she says quietly. “She says she witnessed it but I do not believe her. I suspect Afya told her the plans she had set in motion in case something were to go wrong. I suppose it is my payment for taking that ornament from her during our wager at your contest.”

“You are in grave peril visiting me this way,” I whisper. “Haifa, you must go now!” But she shushes me, kissing me tenderly before speaking once more…

“She dare not risk speaking out against me for fear I will retaliate, Jamilah. And I would, you know. I will say she was in on the plot to kill the King and Queen the whole time if she dares go against me.” I smile at Haifa’s cleverness.

“Jamilah, the Queen is angry,” Haifa quietly explains. “Yasmeen’s words have condemned you; I dare not speak out. Everyone knows of your relationship with Afya.”

“And I would not want you to speak out,” I tell her firmly. I pause as I consider the matter before the truth dawns upon me…

“I curse myself for having entered into that contest. It was her plan all along. You are far wiser than I, Haifa; I should have seen it.”

“She was a crafty one,” Haifa agrees. “But she will do no more harm. Her body is food to the birds and the vultures now.”

She pauses and I sense she has something difficult to tell me. Then she sighs heavily. “Jamilah, I fear it will be bad for you.”

“It is my responsibility and I will bear it,” I tell her firmly. “I do not wish for you to come to any harm over this matter.”

“Do not worry, my beloved; I won’t.” Then she kisses me again. Tears of love and sadness fill my eyes as she begins to comfort me all over again…

9

Haifa leaves before the Queen’s guards come for me at dawn. I’m taken to the harem room and made to undress in front of one and all. I glance over at Haifa and am relieved to see she is not showing any emotion that would give her away.

The Queen is there and she points out four maidens, Haifa and Yasmeen among them. They are instructed to take me into the pool. I gasp anxiously as my worst fears come to light.

My punishment is to fit my sins.

“This is how we deal with traitors in the palace!” she declares. Then she points… “Submerge her!” I gasp just in time before Haifa, Yasmeen and the others push me down into the water. It is to be my final bath, but at least Haifa will be safe.

I am pushed under for the last time, reminding me of the contest with Afya. I should willingly release the bubbles but I cannot fight what is natural to my body. So I try to remain calm and accept what must be. It is only right.

Time passes and my chest begins to strain. It is a struggle but I still cannot make myself open my mouth to succumb. My only hope is that my suffering and death will satisfy the Queen’s anger.

It gets harder and harder and I feel the strain. My stomach reacts once more; it fights and churns and bulges like something wants out. Bubbles escape my mouth and a fire settles in my chest as I start to get dizzy. The end is near.

I try to force myself to go for as long as possible; my body will not permit me otherwise. But in the end I cannot hold out. And I cannot control myself.

I am ashamed when my body suddenly bursts forth with a violent struggle. The four maidens are forced to hold me down with strong hands and I fight even harder. Then more bubbles burst out of my mouth and nose as I swallow water.

The agony is far worse than I could ever have imagined. I find myself envying Afya who was beheaded quickly. But somewhere a voice inside me says this is my penance to Allah for my part in the treachery to the King and Queen.

I fight and struggle as a new agony fills my chest. I wish to see Haifa’s face one last time. But the water is churned up too much. Then my head feels like it swells until something terrible and violent happens inside my mind and I am no more…

EPILOGUE

The water is drained out of the harem pool. Jamilah’s body flows with it into the river where it is never seen again. Haifa successfully hides her emotions until after the Queen and her guards have departed. Then she goes off alone and weeps bitterly.

Months later there is a second attempt on the lives of the King and Queen. Haifa in a last act of bravery throws herself between several attackers and the Queen, taking two arrows full in the chest. She actually smiles as she slumps mortally wounded, knowing she will soon rejoin her beloved Jamilah in death. The Queen is granted just enough time to appreciate the noble sacrifice of one of her harem girls before she is cut down by a flashing sword.

A new King and Queen are installed… and a new age of palace intrigue begins all over again…

(written for Hitomi May 20 ’14 by riwa)

(Inspired by a scene from the movie The Devil of the Desert against the Sons of Hercules.)

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A noble hillside 3.7 (3)

(1)

We were bathing in the river with Queen Asparia when the raiders came. The few guards who were assigned as our protectors stood no chance. They were destroyed to the last man with sword and pike and lance until their noble and valiant blood stained the ground.

I was rounded up along with the queen and her other handmaidens. We remained silent and did not give identity to the presence of our queen for which her eyes showed gratitude. Thankfully the raiders did not recognize when royalty was among them. We were all taken away with nothing more than the chitons on our backs.

It was a long journey to a faraway land. I despaired that I would ever set eyes upon my Hellas again, my homeland. But Queen Asparia carried herself strongly and we in turn vowed to return that strength to her in time of need.

I feared the worst when we came upon a band of Babylonian soldiers. They needed slaves in that great city and we soon discovered the purpose of the raid upon our land. It was the way of the raiders to make coin for themselves by pillaging the countryside and gathering the inhabitants to bring to Babylon.

We were turned over to the soldiers but amazingly we were not abused. We were wanted as nothing more than slaves for the city. The raiders never spoke to the Babylonians of where we were captured and Asparia’s secret remained safe. As her handmaidens we vowed that it would remain so until such time as brave warriors might be sent to rescue us, a faint hope at best.

We soon settled in to our hard labor in the city of Babylon. The days were long, the work hard. But Queen Asparia never once complained and she became our pillar. And we kept her secret.

It would prove to be an impossible secret to keep…

(2)

The King of Assyria came to call upon the King of Babylon. He offered up untold riches in exchange for all the slaves of Babylon. The king suspected ulterior motives and therefore had his wife ply him with strong drink to get him to divulge the reason for such a request.

In a drunken stupor with the seductive Taneal he foolishly revealed his true purpose. He had learned of the raid upon Hellas and that the raiders had unknowingly taken the queen of the Hellenes. He wished to locate her and to force her to become his wife and thereby meld Assyria with Hellas into a powerful empire.

The king denied the request and returned the riches, sending the King of Assyria on his way. It became his desire to identify Queen Asparia and take her for himself, putting away his own wife. We knew none of this of course… only that one day the king came down to our slave cavern unannounced.

“I have learned the Queen of the Hellenes is down here!” he told us sternly and we all stiffened involuntarily with alarm. “She will identify herself to me at once.” But Asparia did not speak.

“Freedom to the slave who will identify her to me!” the king proclaimed. “She will be given safe passage back to her country if only she points out the queen to me now!”

I steeled myself for the betrayal to come. But no betrayal was forthcoming. We all remained silent… resolute.

“Very well,” the kind declared, and I could tell his anger had been provoked. “You will tell me in due course. For now you will be excused from your labors for the rest of the day.”

Instantly I sensed this “rest” would not be welcome once we learned of its true nature…

(3)

The king knew of the group of women taken from the country of the Hellenes. It made it easy for him and the palace guards to round us up and march us out of the city. We were taken to a rocky hillside and tied one by one to numerous posts imbedded in the ground.

“Speak now and you can prevent what is to come!” he called aloud. But no one spoke a word. I was proud to be associated with such noble handmaidens.

Asparia was tied to a post not far from my own. I caught her eye and saw the love and great pride reflected there. I was determined that if anyone did betray my queen it most certainly would not be me!

“Very well!” the king announced angrily. “You will stay here with no food or water.” Then he told the captain of the guard, “Make sure none of them die. A slave can only take so much. Soon they will tell me what I want to know!” Then he went back to his palace along with most of the guards, leaving a small detail to take word back to the king should there be loose lips among us.

We were left there in the hot sun to reflect on our decision not to give away the identity of Queen Asparia…

(4)

We stood out there all day upon the rocky hillside. The sun beat down mercilessly upon us and the posts were uncomfortable. But no one complained.

There was the occasional moan and a head would be turned in that direction. But a gallant smile was the only response. We held up courageously all through the day.

The heat of the day gave way to the chill of the night. It was impossible to sleep but for a few moments here and there. There were more moans and sighs of weariness. But there were no words of complaint, nor were there any requests to give in to the demands of the king. And once again there were no betrayals to the ever present guards.

In the middle of the night the palace guard came out with torches. They walked among us, listening intently for some sort of word, some betrayal from a body weakened by hunger, thirst or cold. But none among us gave such a word. In that darkest hour I never felt such kinship as I did among the queen’s handmaidens…

(5)

I sensed danger when the king came out with his palace guard the next morning. Surely by now he must have known we were not going to divulge the identity of our queen! The presence of two men with cruel whips confirmed as much!

They wasted no time randomly picking out a girl! Her name was Dianthe, meaning god-flower. I gasped in alarm as Queen Asparia recoiled in horror.

Dianthe said not a word until they began to beat her with the whip upon her chest and belly. Her screams penetrated my heart and I saw the queen wince in agony. But still Dianthe did not betray her mistress.

Asparia could bear it no longer, could not bear the beating of one of her beloved handmaidens. “I am queen of the Hellenes!” she cried out, and I feared the cruel tactic had worked.

Scant moments later another female voice cried out, “I AM QUEEN OF THE HELLENES!” Then another… and another!! The guards looked around in confusion and dismay and I nearly laughed as I lent my voice along with all the others. We were all proclaiming ourselves to be the queen of the Hellenes!!

Queen Asparia could not bear the thought of them returning to Dianthe’s beating. So she cried out again… “NO – I AM QUEEN OF THE HELLENES!!” Others loudly took up that same cry, I among them… “NO – I AM QUEEN OF THE HELLENES!!”  We were determined not to give her up to these barbarians! Even Dianthe lent her voice to the cry!

I saw Queen Asparia look all around with tears in her eyes. I was never so proud to be called among her handmaidens as I was at that moment. Together we had made that terrible place a noble hillside.

The captain of the guards looked around admiringly. He was a handsome man, and a strong warrior I could tell. “Surely they ALL are worthy to be the queen of the Hellenes,” he acknowledged. But the King of Babylon was furious.

“FETCH THE OIL!” he roared. “I will teach these Hellenes what it is to make a mockery of the king!” Our voices fell silent and I felt a terrible dread…

(6)

Men were quickly dispatched back to the city. We could not help but look at each other, wondering the meaning of this new development. There was alarm in Queen Asparia’s eyes when they locked with mine, and I knew she feared for her handmaidens.

The soldiers returned with a large barrel of oil. Torches were lit as those two with the whips returned to Dianthe. There was a loud gasp among us when her chiton was cruelly ripped from her shoulders, leaving her fully exposed to the elements.

Those horrible men dipped their hands into the oil and proceeded to massage it all over into the skin of poor Dianthe. She moaned and whimpered as they roughly handled her fine breasts with their dirty, oily hands. One of them even fingered her womanhood deeply, making her writhe and moan in total humiliation. Then the king handed over a torch.

There was a pause as though those barbarians were awaiting her final answer. But Dianthe gave none. There was fear in her eyes but she proudly lifted herself up to her full stature. Then the king angrily cried out, “BURN HER!” and a torch stretched out to touch her skin.

Dianthe began to shriek in absolute horror. Then the flames caught the oil on her body and she was totally consumed, becoming as the flame of a giant candle! She began screaming in absolute terror, causing the rest of us to wail in grief and horror.

Queen Asparia was beside herself, unable to stand the loss of one of her handmaidens in this manner. She began to scream, “NO – NO; I AM THE ONE – I AM THE ONE!”

I was sure this would identify her; I was also certain this would doom the rest of us to a similar fate. But scarce had she gotten out the words before others began screaming, “NO – NO; I AM THE ONE! I AM THE QUEEN OF THE HELENES!!”  “NO; IT IS I!!”  “NO – NO; IT IS I!! I AM THE ONE!!” By then Dianthe’s screams had abated and she had slumped against her post, her entire body aflame.

The king motioned and those two moved to another girl at random, one I knew as Eugeneia. She stiffened and shuddered as her chiton was ripped off her body. The others continued the chant of “NO – NO; I AM THE QUEEN OF THE HELENES!” even as they rubbed oil all over her body, making sure to work it into her womanhood.

Queen Asparia let out a wail, causing others to cry out the same. Even now they refused to identify her at the cost of their own lives! The torch touched Eugeneia and she lit up as a large flame on the morning hillside in the midst of horrible, anguished screams.

A third handmaiden was set aflame… and then a forth. The king raised his hand to pause the proceedings as though expecting the identification to be made at any moment. But there was nothing forthcoming save crying and sobbing now.

I saw Queen Asparia look around at her handmaidens, saw the anguish in her eyes. But she nodded proudly at them and refused to cry out after that. The others settled down to whimper and await their turn, for surely that was what the king intended.

He did not disappoint…

One by one we were stripped of our chitons, oiled up and then set on fire. No sooner would the screams of the dying be silenced when new screams of the burning would fill the air. But we no longer chanted that we were the queen of the Hellenes.

It no longer mattered…

The hillside grew warm from the flames of the burning handmaidens. All I could do was pant heavily for breath as the terror grew at awaiting my turn. I could see now we were all doomed to destruction.

It was horrible when Queen Asparia faced her turn. But she stood resolute upon that hillside. I could see she was determined to go out proudly along with each of her handmaidens. The heaviness of living with this upon her conscience would be too much even for her to bear. So she did not give herself away… not even then!

I watched as they molested her naked body with oil, watched as they fingered her womanhood. Then they set her on fire with the torch. Those of us remaining screamed right along with her until we were all screamed out.

One by one I lost my friends: Frona the self controlled… Kalliope the beautifully voiced one… Lois and Lysandra. The hillside grew intensely warm from the flames, although bodies were beginning to burn out and crumple into small piles of embers upon the ground. They all went until I alone was left.

By then the king had departed in a rage. It had become quite clear to him that the only thing he had succeeded in doing was destroying valuable slave labor. Only a handful of the soldiers remained to conclude the day’s work, along with the captain of the guard who had been entrusted to complete the gruesome task.

He finally came to me when I was the last. I was all but devastated, a despairing shell of the woman I was. Seeing all my friends burn, seeing my queen in fiery agony and death, had almost been more than I could bear. He seemed to sense this in me.

“Babylonians,” he breathed in disgust, shaking his head. “What name is that now but one of barbarism and cruelty? What have we become that we must stoop to such evil?” Then he looked at me with a strange kindness.

“What is your name? You need not tell me if that is what you wish.”

“What does it matter now?” I sighed with a heavy heart. “You have destroyed my queen and my friends. I am Talitha.”

“Talitha,” he repeated as though searching his mind for some meaning. “Damsel… maiden…”

“Young lamb,” I added quietly, “…like a lamb unto the slaughter.” It was ironic and I had to smile.

One of the soldiers came to oil me but the captain roughly pushed him aside. “I will do this one myself!” he said angrily. Then he dipped his hand into the oil.

He was not rough like the others. He touched me with a fondness… a certain affection. “You are a noble people,” he said softly, “…perishing on a noble hillside. Truly we are barbarians. Our reign will not last long.” He seemed almost regretful.

He massaged my breasts like a lover and I felt soothed. He was tender with me as he rubbed the oil all over into my body. Then he reached in to oil his fingers.

“Forgive this intrusion,” he said apologetically. But I felt I had found someone worthy of soiling me. If it had to be a Babylonian then I wanted it to be him!

I willingly spread my legs for him. “You may have it,” I said submissively. There was a fondness in his eyes as he began to finger me.

There was something gentle in his touch, the way one is touched by a lover. I sighed and whimpered as I thrust against his fingers. He let out a little smile and nodded as though it was the only small gift he could think of to bestow upon me before carrying out his grisly task.

I glanced at his belt and noticed the dagger that hung there. “Kill me with the blade,” I murmured quietly, hopefully. “Then you may burn me. I wish to join my friends and my queen. All I ask is that you do it quickly.” Then I thrust my breasts outward, offering myself to him.

He looked around as though seeing who might be watching. But I despaired as he hefted the torch. Then he surprised me when his hand reached down for the dagger.

“It will be done, little lamb,” he said softly. Then once more he glanced around to make sure no one was watching closely.

I felt a small joy at his kindness and I became thankful he was the one who had oiled me… the one who had given me a very small pleasure. For now it was enough. Then I thrust out my breasts even more.

He furtively glanced around one last time before quickly plunging the blade into my left breast. It pierced my heart and I sighed with gladness. I was barely aware of the torch touching my body a few moments later – the fire beginning to consume me – before my soul left to be with my noble and exalted queen…

(written for Hitomi Apr 20 ’14 by riwa)

(Inspired by, and vidcaps taken from, Hercules and the Tyrants of Babylon. Vidcaps are used for illustration purposes only.)

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