Bloody revenge

For a writing contest at another website, we were inspired to see what we could come up with off this picture. The following story is my creation.

Bloody revenge

“I say we kill her.”

“Not with those Berettas in her shoulder holsters you won’t.”

“Will you two pipe down before she hears us?”

“I don’t care. She killed my Tony!”

“And my Buster!”

“How do you think I feel? She killed Leon too, you know.”

“I say we go kill her right now.”

“Right here? In the bar? Are you insane? She’ll blow you away before you get halfway across the floor!”

“Just look at her laughing and drinking and smoking.”

“Did you hear that? She was just bragging to that other bitch how she put ‘em down so easily! It’s like they meant nothing to her!”

“Look, you two! I feel the same way. I just don’t think there’s anything we can do about it, ok? Besides, we’re all unarmed!”

“I want to kill her!”

“Me too!”

“You’re both drunk, ok? Maybe I’d better take you home.”

“Get your hands off me! I can drive… I think.”

“Stella, would you tell Carly she can’t drive? Hell, you shouldn’t be driving either!”

“I wanna kill her!”

“Ok – ok; so you want to kill her, Carly! I heard you the first time! Go home before you get your head blown off, ok? You too, Stella!”

“C’mon, Stella. Joyce doesn’t give a damn!”

“I do too. It’s just that we don’t have any weapons. Now go home and go to sleep, ok?”

“Hello?”

“It’s me – Carly. I’m here with Stella. We’re at her place and we’re gonna kill her.”

“Are you two nuts? What did you do… follow her home? I’m surprised you’re both still alive right now.”

“Are you coming or not? She’s in there right now and we’re going to go in and kill her.”

“With what – your breath? C’mon, Carly; quit fooling around.”

“We’re here at 5555 West Westchester. Get your ass down here or we’re killing her without you.”

“Carly, don’t you fucking – hello? Hello?? Damnit, they’re going to get themselves killed! I’d better get over there and try to stop them.”

“There you are! Are you two crazy? This is insane!”

“Here’s a knife, Joyce. I brought ‘em from home while Carly followed the murdering scum over here.”

“You followed her home? Carly, what’s the matter with you??”

“Look, she’s in there right now. I’m going in with you guys or without you! I ain’t letting no bitch put my Tony in the grave!”

“Carly, your Tony wasn’t exactly the most faithful of guys, you know?”

“I don’t care. She killed my Tony and I’m going in after her!”

“Carly would you… shit! Stella would you tell her to – what the hell are you doing??”

“I’m going in with her!”

“Stella?? Carly?? Shit!! Don’t go… oh, hell. I guess today is as good a day to die as any other and… you mean she left the front door unlocked??”

“No, Carly got it open.”

“Not so loud, you two! She’ll hear us!”

“Carly, this is a stupid idea!”

“I don’t care. I’m going in to kill that fucking bitch right now!”

“Carly, don’t you… fuck, she’s going inside! Stella, not you too??”

“I’m going in with her, Joyce. Are you coming or not?”

“I never did think I’d live to see my 32nd birthday anyway. I still think this is a bad idea.”

“Where is she going? All the way to the back? She’s waiting at that door, Joyce!”

“Carly, what are you…?”

“Shhh! She’s in here! I can hear her moaning!”

“Moaning? She’s moaning?? What the fuck is she doing in there – Carly, don’t open that door! She’ll see us!”

“I’m just going to take a peek.”

“What the fuck?”

“Stella, what do you see?”

“She’s masturbating, Joyce! The fucking bitch is masturbating!”

“Masturbating?? You’ve got to be fucking kidding me!”

“See for yourself!”

“Well I’ll be! What a fucking slut! She’s really rubbing! She’s naked and everything! Look at those tattoos on her arms!”

“Would you forget about those?”

“Carly, you’re still not serious about going in and… oh for gawd’s sake! Let’s get out of here while we still can!”

“I’m going in and slice up that masturbating scum! My Tony deserves better!”

“Carly, that’s suicide!”

“If she’s going in then I’m going in with her!”

“Stella, not you too??”

“Look! I think she’s getting ready to orgasm! See how flushed she looks?”

“Carly, she’ll kill you before you get halfway across the floor!”

“I don’t see her guns anywhere! Besides, I don’t care!”

“Carly, damn you…!”

“I’m going in!”

“Carly, no!”

“I’m going with her!”

“Stella, not you too??”

“Either we get her or she gets us! You coming or not?”

“I don’t think this is such a good idea…”

“She’s cumming so I’m going in! YEEAAHHHHH!”

“CARLY, NO!”

“AAUUUGGGHHH!”

“DAMN, STELLA; NOT YOU TOO – OH FUCK IT!”

“What the hell?? What the hell are you bitches – PUT THOSE KNIVES DOWN – AIIIEEEEEEEEE!”

“STAB HER; STAB THE FUCKING WHORE!”

“AIIEEEEEEEE!”

“STAB HER – STAB HER! TAKE THAT, YOU BITCH! THAT’S FOR MY TONY!”

“YOU FUCKING…… SHITHEADS….. AAUUGGGHHHHH!”

“STAB HER – STAB HER! CUT HER, JOYCE!”

“TAKE IT, BITCH! TAKE IT RIGHT IN THE STOMACH!”

“I GOT HER TITS! TAKE THAT, YOU BITCH!”

“I….ugh….. p-p-please…”

“UNGH – UNGH – UNGH… THAT’S FOR MY BUSTER, YOU MURDERING SCUM!”

“You can’t… fucking… AWWKK!”

“She’s really bleeding now, Stella! You cut her fucking throat!”

“Take it easy, Carly! We got her already! You don’t have to turn her crotch into mincemeat!”

“I – DON’T – FUCKING – CARE – ‘CAUSE – THIS – IS – FOR – MY – TONY!”

“All right – all right, she’s dead; ok? Geez, Carly, you turned her crotch into hamburger!”

“I don’t fucking care! She killed my Tony! AWWWWWWW!”

“C’mon, Carly; don’t cry! Fuck; we’d better get out of here before any of her friends catch us in here! Carly, for gawd’s sake, stop stabbing her, ok?? We killed her five times already!”

“I – DON’T – FUCKING…!”

“Stella, grab Carly, ok? We’ve got to get out of here before her friends show up!”

“C’mon, Carly! Joyce is right! Let’s go! You’ve already stabbed her enough times!”

“No – no; I want to keep…”

“Take the knife away from her, Stella! C’mon; let’s get out of here! Shit, we’ve got blood all over us! She’s dead, Carly! She’s dead, ok?? She’s dead, there’s blood everywhere, and the bed is a mess! Let’s go before we’re next!”

“She killed my Tony! AWWWWW!”

“We know – we know; stop blubbering already! C’mon, Stella! Help me get Carly out of here before we all end up dead!”

© 2017 (A Black Lagoon fanfic for “Revy”)

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