Mar 1, 2011 – Story locations: The holodeck 0 (0)

 

It’s fun to try writing a story within the confines of a fictional setting. I’ve always liked the holodeck in the Star Trek universe. It allows you endless possibilities and you can replay them over and over again if you want to.

I always wondered what kind of a story I could put in there. My enthusiasms lean toward the drowning variety and I remember scenes from episodes and movies from the Star Trek universe where water was involved. But last year I got an opportunity to go in a different direction while still including some water.

I visit and post stories from time to time on another forum that is not water-related. There is a male there who likes it when you write snuff stories about his ex named Teri. He likes reading as many stories as possible about her so writing one for him is like him eating potato chips… he wants to eat (read) more.

With that in mind it occurred to me that I could use the holodeck to write a series of chapters about snuffing his ex. I also figured I could get creative with the scenarios, being as how you can do almost anything in there. So I ended up writhing 12 different chapters for him. I call it Snuff Teri 5.0 (the name of the holodeck program) and I will post it to a separate category, even though most of the chapters will have some sort of asphyxia theme. I hope you find some of them to your liking.

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Feb 17, 2011 – The Suzi stories 3 (2)

 

I met Suzi online and she told me about her enthusiasm for my stories. She told me she had a female lover and that the two often played dunking games in their bathtub after she got home from work. She’s told me some of their activities and one or two of those conversations ended up as the theme of a couple of her stories.

She told me that playing Water Polo had a major impact on developing her enjoyment of the water and of dunking other females. At first she was the victim but over time she told me she learned how to hold her own quite well. It fueled her enthusiasm for dunking and holding down other women so the few stories written for her often have that theme in mind.

She had a major influence in my story series Saving Amanda, along with a few others I wrote. One of them she mostly wrote by herself, allowing me to edit and then post it. To find her stories you can either search for her name or just use the link I have provided for you (Note: a couple of other stories also pop up using the Suzi search).

I haven’t had any contact with her in a few years now. She was fun to chat with and write for. I sincerely wish her well, wherever she may be.

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Feb 8, 2011 – 200th post and Picture Story category 0 (0)

I am in the process of creating a PICTURE STORY category and will be grouping the appropriate stories into it. These will be stories heavily illustrated by pictures but will not include stories that may only have one or two pictures in it. For instance, the two AF pictures stories I have uploaded will not only be found in the Drowning category because they are drowning stories but will also be found in the Picture Story category as well.

Some of these picture stories will be heavily sexual in nature. Eventually I may add some sort of sexual category. But in the meantime any picture stories I wrote that do not also fit in another category will end up here.

For my 200th post I decided to upload a picture story about Emma. Because her snooping gets her into trouble she will end up drowning for her foolishness. But in the meantime there will be a lot of sexual content in that particular story to go along with the pictures.

Not everyone will like every picture story I post. But I hope there are some I post that will be to your liking. Thanks again for visiting the story site.

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Feb 3, 2011 – Picture stories 0 (0)

I have a number of stories I have written that I have illustrated with numerous pictures. Many of them come from the now defunct Aqua Fantasies. I enjoyed taking those pictures and putting stories to them. They are mostly of a drowning nature.

I’ve also used pictures from other sources. Many are sexual in nature and have come from previews of websites where you might see anywhere from 12 to 20 preview pictures that the public has access to. I used these to illustrate stories of a sexual nature. I’ve even written a few Emma stories using these types of pictures.

Of course one way to find all these stories with pictures is to use the picture tag on the right side of the screen. However I’m considering adding a separate picture category for any stories that have more than 6-8 pictures as illustrations. Right now there are three that would fit this category: AF’s Block Party, AF’s Water Torture and MMP’s Raft Ruckus. I would welcome any thoughts or comments you may have on this issue.

Thanks again for visiting the website. I hope you continue to enjoy the stories I am uploading…

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Jan 27, 2011 – Progress report 0 (0)

I have a lot of stories left to upload. I’ve written several picture stories and I’ve written a few that don’t fit into any of the categories I have listed at the moment. So at some point in time I’ll get to those.

At the same time I have stories I’m currently working on. I always seem to have something in progress along with a few that I’ve shelved, eventually hoping to get back to them. Two of them are customs that probably won’t be made public while the others are varied. One is another Snuff Club story while yet another I’m working on is about an escort who is hired for a guy’s birthday with the provision that she be able to swim and hold her breath and be able to operate using scuba gear.

I also have other stories I could go back to, tales that could be followed up on. There is the story about the scuba slut meeting all those people on the dive boat – I’ve written two chapters about her. Then there is the possibility of more underwater research laboratory drowning stories. I’ve toyed with follow-ups to older stories I’ve written; I’ve even given some thought to Shelly’s slave-boy meeting up with her four friends again. And of course I’m still getting inspiration from Emma and jqpublic. So be on the lookout for new stories for them or older stories for them that have yet to be posted.

You can always feel free to comment on story ideas and any other topics you enjoy. I can’t promise I’ll write about each and every one. But you never can tell what idea will give me inspiration. I’m constantly flooded with ideas and works in progress. But when inspiration strikes you can find me typing away at my keyboard at a furious pace, trying to write down everything that is swirling in my head…

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Jan 20, 2011 – Snuff Club Stories 4.1 (23)

Back in January of 2009 a friend of mine on another website got the idea for a special club for gambling, sex and death. For lack of a better title it became known as the Snuff Club. She and I passed many thoughts back and forth about how the place would operate until I began to write a story titled My Visit To The Snuff Club. As usual the story took off on me until it became a 40 chapter monster. Since then I have written several more stories about the Club.

The sex that takes place is mostly consensual and ranges anywhere from one-on one male/female and female/female sex to orgies and gangbangs. Many times these are fantasies that a woman is finally getting to partake in. There are even some situations where a female is dominated with pain and pleasure. Such scenes can get rather graphic but there is no scat, and the bloody scenes are usually limited to the impalings and the occasional beheading. In this fantasy world there is no discussion of STDs.

Interestingly enough, this Club deals with unexpected pregnancies in a rather unique way. Any female who gets pregnant is subsequently snuffed. Therefore each female has a little pregnancy sensor inserted in her navel or belly button for the express purpose of letting her know once her egg has been impregnated if she is fertile. For the purposes of some stories, this can happen within a few short hours. Since there is always a risk of becoming pregnant, it adds an erotic dimension to the sex act for some clients of the Club.

Another risk a female runs is that her body virtually belongs to the guy who brings her in through the doors of the Club. She can be whored out to anyone he might desire or he can choose to have her snuffed. If he runs low on cash, he can whore out his woman until he either recoups his losses or is forced to snuff her. There is a cash minimum men need to bring with them in order to keep their females relatively safe.  But if he loses all of his cash at a gambling table, he loses her to the men he lost to, giving them the choice of having sex with her or snuffing her.

The Entertainment stage is the place where all of the public executions occur. On it are five basic implements: a gallows, a drowning tank, an electric chair that doubles as a strangulation chair, an impalement cross for impaling a woman from ass to mouth, and a pair of guillotines. Every time a woman is executed, there is a red glow from the stage alerting the whole casino that another execution is about to take place. These are highly popular, often including sex acts during a particular execution, and are usually well attended.

A customer can choose to use a private snuff room where he may or may not snuff his female companion. These rooms usually come equipped with a guillotine, a noose, an electric chair, and ropes and bondage gear. If you end up in here, you may or may not survive, depending on the whim of the guy you are with.

Since it requires a certain amount of cash to get inside, there is a constant line of women outside who want to get in. Some of them are clearly in over their heads, not knowing the true risks. Others know exactly what they are getting themselves into. They usually try to offer themselves to single men and couples in the hopes of being allowed inside. Many girls can make a lot of money being whored out. But the risk of getting pregnant means you’d better keep one eye on the clock on the wall and the other on the exit.

There are a few mentions of roasting or cooking a female. There are also a few references to a taxidermist and how heads and bodies can be preserved for kinky play after death. These are scenes that were written for specific individuals and their specific tastes and were included in the story as a whole, including the various execution scenes.

Not everything mentioned in the Snuff Club appeals to everyone. Some favor hangings, while others prefer beheading scenes. Some like female sex, whereas others enjoy the gangbang scene. My hope is that I have included a little bit of everything into something of a storyline that folks will find as a relatively enjoyable read, zipping through certain scenes while enjoying others. These stories can be located under the “Club stories” category.

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Jan 11, 2011 – My 100th post 4 (1)

As I prepare to upload my 100th post to the site (not counting my 4 blog posts) I did a little review…

Of my 99 posts thus far, 14 actually have multiple chapters inside which I combined together into flowing stories. One story was originally divided into 6 parts but I did not indicate the separate sections, although perhaps it is obvious from reading the tale. Donna’s story had 5 separate chapters posted and Diane’s long New Year’s story actually had 19 parts broken up into 4 posted sections. There are even 4 chapters of Shelly with more to come.

So what does all that mean? It could mean that A) riwa is long-winded, B) riwa needs to get a life away from his keyboard, C)) riwa needs a girlfriend,  D) riwa needs to get a job, or E) all of the freakin’ above!

What does that mean to me? A) I’m indeed long-winded (but I hope that means I put out a better story), B) I do need to get away from the keyboard a little bit more, if nothing more than to encounter life and the possibility of more story ideas, C) a girlfriend would be nice but would she approve of the things that I like to write about? And how much writing time would that leave me? It is an interesting thought, D) right now I have the funds so that I don’t have to work, giving me the time to write. But that can’t last forever and it is something I think about. So E is probably correct; it is a little of all of the above.

I guess what it means is that I take my writing seriously, perhaps a little too seriously at times. I am a perfectionist, which means I want my story to be just right. Not only am I trying to please an audience but I’m trying to please myself as well. I take pride in what I do and that often means I nitpick my stories, looking for the best word or phrase to capture the essence of what I’m trying to communicate. And I do that whether it is for a larger audience or whether I’m writing a very specialized story only one or two people may ever read.

I enjoy writing… and I enjoy writing something that pleases many readers. By working on a broader spectrum of stories and writing for different tastes I hope that it makes each story I write ultimately that much better. Perhaps it is that way in life. The more people we know from so many different walks of life the more it helps add to our experiences to make us the person we are.

Anyway, it is time to stop waxing philosophical and get back to posting. My 100th post is for a gentleman who goes by the name of Skip and has contributed renders of Janet for the underwater community. Thanks for your contributions, Skip. I hope I treated Janet right in the story I wrote for you. Thanks for the use of your render.

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Jan 8, 2011 – Donna’s shore leave 0 (0)

I know of Donna’s fantasies from another forum I frequent. She fantasizes about stepping off a stool and hanging herself or of being hung by another woman. She prefers female on female situations and has shared her thoughts in many posts. I find her fantasies erotic and they have inspired me to write a few stories with her in mind. (For more stories about her, click on DONNA.)

I always liked the episode “Shore Leave” from the original Star Trek series. The basic premise is that the crewmembers encounter situations based on what they are or might be thinking about at any given moment. For instance the Captain “…stumbles upon young Finnegan, a cocky Irish practical joker he knew back from his academy days and a former girlfriend, Ruth, whom he hasn’t seen in years (taken from Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia Shore Leave (Star Trek: The Original Series)

As you may have guessed by now the premise is simple. Donna beams down to the planet but her mind is on a former lover and the asphyxia games they used to play together. The reason Yeoman Janice Rand comes into the picture is that Donna has fantasies of seeing the attractive Yeoman hang or of even hanging next to her. It was only a matter of tweaking the setup so that Donna does not pay close enough attention to the Captain’s warning about watching one’s thoughts before she beamed down.

After I posted this to that other forum a few years ago I heard back from Donna. Not only did she like the story but she told me she was a Star Trek fan. She said she liked the character of Janice Rand and that she did have erotic fantasies about her. It was a great pleasure finding out how much she enjoyed the story Donna’s shore leave.

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Jan 3, 2011 – My urge to write and the Shelly Stories 5 (1)

Sometime in the early years after 2000 during some very trying times in my relationship with my wife I began surfing the Internet looking for something – an outlet perhaps. I began a search for “women underwater” as that has always interested me. I found several websites including some that hosted pictures and clips and others that hosted stories. I also discovered a company called *Aquafantasies* with its pictures and clips and a corresponding forum where others shared my interests.

On the forum I found that like-minded people were allowed to share stories, both real and imagined, of encounters in and underwater. I have always had a fascination with the idea of women being underwater and drowning, especially if it was dramatically portrayed in film and on television (but not in real life). I remember when *Cabin by the Lake* first came out on TV. I was interested and yet embarrassed at my… fascination for the plot.

I always enjoyed reading so perhaps it was only natural that after awhile I would turn to writing. I remember a couple of stories I wrote: one in grade school and another in high school. It was only a matter of putting my thoughts together in a manner that flowed well for the reader. But when I found the preview pictures on *Aquafantasies* I began to add text to them, making written stories that had already been put into a 10-15 minute clip. I enjoyed the process and began writing other stories.

I joined that particular forum (whose current incarnation is Aquafans.org) and was given permission to write and post stories around 2003. I discovered to my delight that I’d found my outlet. I enjoyed writing and others enjoyed reading my work. But I was still feeling rather lonely in real life and I longed for a female companion, especially one who loved being in the water as much as I did. And thus, *Shelly* was born…

I made her independent and gave her a confidence I still find lacking in myself at times. I also gave her an interest in sex underwater and erotic drowning (but not dying) based on stories I had read on the forum of certain personalities and on chats I had with certain individuals. Looking back I sometimes wonder if writing about her met a need in my life at that point.

I’m not sure how far I was into the series before I began thinking how I might bring my SHELLY STORIES  to a close. I guess I always pictured her as having a certain ending and that my relationship with her in story form would someday come to an end. Maybe I outgrew her or maybe I just felt like her time had come and gone. I realize how popular she was (and apparently still is) and I suppose someday I could possibly *resurrect her*, so to speak. But for now I look back on her fondly, especially since she was one character who I poured my heart and soul into…

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Dec 31, 2010 – Inspiration can strike… 0 (0)

Inspiration can strike at any moment. My inspiration for the story Naida’s lesson came from a commercial for Direct TV (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rkB9OT2XVvA). What struck me was the look the woman in the silver dress in the middle of the sofa (Serafina) gave to the one holding the tray of gold (Naida).

It was easy to picture Serafina as being the head bitch and ruler of the mansion, easily jealous and prone to bouts of anger. It was also easy to imagine her loathing of Naida. From there it was simply a matter of adding a pool and a motive for wanting to teach Naida a lesson. I figured with the Russian owning such an impressive mansion, surely there would be a nice indoor pool available for his females… and available for Serafina to use for her disciplinary sessions.

As for the cruelty shown to Naida while she was in the water, that idea came from online chats I’ve been having with a female friend. She has shared with me some of the erotic things that have been done to her in and out of the pool. Her desire is to read about the abuse of someone underwater so she can imagine it is her being the one mistreated. So that is how the story Naida’s lesson came to be.

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